Meng Po’s Soup (Revised Edition)

Come on, come on, go forward

By the way, I haven't given up on this pit yet~~~I'll come back and finish it~~~~The author's reply: Sorry, sorry... I've been filling this hole, but I've been completely obsessed with it lately... Embarrassing, I will come back when I finish today~

Phew~~~~ Listen? Very good and powerful Why do the tone of voice that is obviously meant to be teasing sometimes make me feel infinitely sad And Fairy Sword Four is also where I struggle~~~In short, I'm depressed~~~~The author's reply: Touch, everyone is a victim of depression in Sword and Sword 4... This, this, wipe the sweat... You may hear that Ksitigarbha has a bad taste, but look at the sky, there is no time when this Bodhisattva does not have a bad taste...

As expected, those with harmless smiles are always the most unscrupulous. The author replied: JJ, that one is a Bodhisattva~~ Some people said a few days ago that I compiled Ksitigarbha as a karma... Lol... But for this kind of thing, just know it in your heart and respect it in your heart. There is no need to be more truthful in the article, laugh... Hug JJ~~

Sigh, you are indeed very skillful in choosing words! Author's reply: Cover your face and smile, JJ is too much of a reward... I still need to work hard~~

After reading this article, An MM has a very strong foundation in Chinese studies, especially the style of ancient Chinese novels that permeates the dialogue. She uses it very familiarly and naturally, and I admire it. It is now a popular model for stories about gods and monsters on the Internet to renovate old stories and create new ones, integrate one's own thoughts, and then interweave them into a series of story systems. The advantages of this method are that, first, many of the ideas that the author wants to express can be clearly and concisely deduced in a concise way, and it is easier to control and coordinate. Second, there are many ancient legends, and there are many worth pondering. As the author accumulates more, he will have the ability and foundation to pick up the best, and this kind of arrangement will become more and more extensive. I'm not very talented, but I can only read from the narration that it has a Gulong-like style of rapid progression of short sentences, a style of hiding gods and mysteries in the dialogue, and the cultural penetration like a storybook novel is really a master. Several scenes are all completed in the form of dialogue, which is a bit monotonous. The most criticized thing about Gu Long's style is the short sentences and the pretentious emotions after pretending to be mysterious. In this article, the dialogue seems to be debating Zen and debating scriptures, mysterious and mysterious, but it more or less adds the flavor of "pretending". The natural feeling of the text and plot is greatly affected by this, and it seems a bit too fast and rigid. If we adjust the mode of the scene, soften the connection of details, expose more of the story itself, and reduce the amount of meditation-style dialogue, will the readability and naturalness be better? In my humble opinion, it would be rude and impolite to ask for advice when doing something wrong. Author's reply: Thank you JJ for your review, I will continue to improve in the future~~

Top top top top author's reply: I replied once, but I didn't know why the RP could not be displayed, so I replied again... The original intention of this article is because of the resentment of Sword and Sword 4, and then as the author's dissatisfaction with the original work, laugh... Touch, thank you for your support~ Even though I am slow, I will persevere and finish the trick, lol... Author's reply: Why can't my reply be displayed... Thank you for your support ~ This is actually the product of resentment. Really, the resentment of Sword and Sword 4, the resentment of my own poor work, led to re-revision, so I came up with this, haha...

For Po Meng, wanting freedom is the most painful thing~ Why would you want to write about this topic? The author replied: Laugh... Touch... I rewrote one of my articles because I was so excited by the ending of Sword and Sword 4 this year~ What is the pain of Po Meng? In fact, my original intention was just to write a story and challenge myself. As a result, as a writer, my picky temper broke out, so... Hands down, am I really a strange person==