When two worlds intersect,
What will happen;
When Mao Lilan and Ryuzaki Sakurano exchanged souls,
What will happen again;
When everything can only become an illusion that looks like a dream but not a dream;
What will be the fate of several people?
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Since my mother-in-law swallowed up the 3rd and 4th floors of my seniors that year, the third chapter was moved to the chapter numbered 26. Please pay attention when reading the article! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Reader comments
In fact, I always feel that why did Shinichi ask Lan to wait for him? It was obviously him who left her first time and time again.
No, Echizen, you should at least take care of where the real Ryuzaki Sakurano is and how she is doing. She is your friend, so you should take care of her out of humanitarianism!
I don't want too many emotional lines. The male protagonist can just be a tool. I just want to see the female protagonist be beautiful and pursue a career.
It turns out to be an ancient piece of writing, no wonder it's so bloody
You can really see the great care and progress! Let's talk about the introduction and content summary first. These two areas have been improved a lot. From this point, we can already see the great intention. Let's talk about the content of the novel. The plot of the content is even more exciting! (Li Ye's contact has increased, etc.) It's really great!
If I want to make some suggestions, I think we can focus on the emotional expression of the protagonist and add a simple description of the environment (social environment and natural environment). Also, the ratio of sentences to text is too high. Maybe it can be more concise or add some other content to enrich the emotions that need to be expressed.
The above is my personal opinion~
If you have any other suggestions, I think there are many online writers on site B who may be able to help you with their experience summaries, answers to questions, and writing tips for newcomers. If you are still writing articles, then I will still call you, come on~
", Lan will choose to ignore it." This is a big bug for the author~
You wouldn't choose to ignore it, would you?
Updated, great——! ! !
It was this article that got me hooked on the Arctic CP of Jibu Lan. QAQ
In this river? In this Ganges River
The writing is good and the characters are well developed.
Why didn't Xiaolan think of calling her mobile phone? If the true Sakurano was dressed as Ran, where would she go?
In fact, I always feel that why did Shinichi ask Lan to wait for him? It was obviously him who left her first time and time again.
No, Echizen, you should at least take care of where the real Ryuzaki Sakurano is and how she is doing. She is your friend, so you should take care of her out of humanitarianism!
I don't want too many emotional lines. The male protagonist can just be a tool. I just want to see the female protagonist be beautiful and pursue a career.
It turns out to be an ancient piece of writing, no wonder it's so bloody
You can really see the great care and progress! Let's talk about the introduction and content summary first. These two areas have been improved a lot. From this point, we can already see the great intention. Let's talk about the content of the novel. The plot of the content is even more exciting! (Li Ye's contact has increased, etc.) It's really great! If I want to make some suggestions, I think we can focus on the emotional expression of the protagonist and add a simple description of the environment (social environment and natural environment). Also, the ratio of sentences to text is too high. Maybe it can be more concise or add some other content to enrich the emotions that need to be expressed. The above is my personal opinion~ If you have any other suggestions, I think there are many online writers on site B who may be able to help you with their experience summaries, answers to questions, and writing tips for newcomers. If you are still writing articles, then I will still call you, come on~
", Lan will choose to ignore it." This is a big bug for the author~ You wouldn't choose to ignore it, would you?
Updated, great——! ! !
It was this article that got me hooked on the Arctic CP of Jibu Lan. QAQ
In this river? In this Ganges River
The writing is good and the characters are well developed.
Why didn't Xiaolan think of calling her mobile phone? If the true Sakurano was dressed as Ran, where would she go?
Hey! I don't eat pig offal or blood products.