When writing a novel, you have to stay calm and think things through.
Don't act on impulse, don't abandon your story, and above all, don't write a tragic ending on a whim.
Otherwise, you'll end up like Xu Qingru:
She acted rashly, abandoned her story, and turned herself into a coffee table!
Online author Xu Qingru transmigrates as the heroine,
only to find herself inside the one tragic story she'd abandoned.
Will she fall for the hero she wrote, who is exactly her type?
But you wrote him to die, so are you going to spend your life alone?
Can you stand watching the people around you die one by one?
Can she change the ending?
It's been a while since I started complaining and I don't know if I've regressed... When I first read it, I thought it was a time-traveling rant, but later I realized it wasn't. The writing style shows a chaotic state, for example, it becomes very fast at wedges. The first half is fun, and the second half is a bit deep. Then I started thinking about which route the author intended to take. The further you read, the less and less you complain, and the heroine's psychological activities and speculation about the world become more and more. At the age of 11, it seems that it has completely reduced to a lyrical article... I guessed that the author wanted to adopt a cold humor mode? If you don't choose dry humor and want to continue to complain, you can consider it. Because judging from the tone of the article, the author's writing is relatively... Gentle and indifferent, which does not fit the impression of the sharp style of complaints. If I continue writing, it will be even more confusing if it suddenly turns into a sharp rant. Some parts of it are quite hilarious to complain about~ (cough my laugh points are weird and a bit high), I (who rarely read romance) think the concept is quite new. However, the development of the plot is too slow, and there is a feeling of "the map cuts too fast for me to see", which easily makes people question the rationality. Most of the plot is what the heroine thinks, and there is little interaction. And the interaction is not passionate enough. Due to the small amount of writing and the large number of characters, it feels like the author is forcing the readers to know the characters' personalities, making it difficult to create a distinct protagonist. The characters, while unlikely to be confused, come across as weak and thus unattractive. The advice I gave you is to think about your writing style first, and then try not to break it. There is room for improvement in the writing style. When making complaints, the plot must be taken into consideration. The interaction between people can be described more in writing, and more side descriptions can be used when shaping the characters. Make a clear distinction between deepness and funnyness. Don't make one moment funny than the next 45° sad. This makes people tipsy qwq The article becomes more and more interesting the more you read it, but the pace at the beginning is not well grasped and it is too slow and it is easy for people to abandon the article. If you want to complain, you should complain about the new atmosphere, new style and new posture! Only by blinding readers with cool writing can you capture their hearts! [Clench fist] _(:з∠)_Well, it's easier said than done... I have a lot of problems myself... It's easy to find out other people's problems. QAQ If you want to comment on my articles, you can, hehe~ Welcome.
Hhhhh Your comment w has gained weight and I'll read it slowly~