Too many typos. The author should be careful to catch bugs.
It feels like either the author is a talkative, or the male protagonist is going to be a talkative. There is too much inner activity, which is trivial and boring.
This chapter has too many typos and too few paragraphs. One paragraph is longer than a page.
Although there are many articles about furries nowadays, this article is very interesting.
Wedding ceremony
It's really easy to see tweed if you don't pay attention.
If you don't drink, I'll 'stay' and ignore you.
Just
After tidying up, Shi Lei sat on the 'tidy up' and looked at the fire, adding dry materials from time to time.
Is this... An 'animal skin'?
The content is okay, but the writing is too messy.
The content is okay, but the writing is too messy.
Is this an abandoned trap? Woohoo!
Too many typos. The author should be careful to catch bugs.
It feels like either the author is a talkative, or the male protagonist is going to be a talkative. There is too much inner activity, which is trivial and boring.
This chapter has too many typos and too few paragraphs. One paragraph is longer than a page.
Although there are many articles about furries nowadays, this article is very interesting.
Wedding ceremony It's really easy to see tweed if you don't pay attention.
If you don't drink, I'll 'stay' and ignore you. Just
After tidying up, Shi Lei sat on the 'tidy up' and looked at the fire, adding dry materials from time to time. Is this... An 'animal skin'?
The content is okay, but the writing is too messy.
The content is okay, but the writing is too messy.