Everyone calls her Hongdou, but she hates that name. She is always thinking that something associated with longing is hardly suited to someone as cold and loveless as her.
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So Hongdou is Xiangsi, the eldest lady of the Liu family, right? What the scholar likes is the willow tree, which is the eldest lady, but they don't know each other. Missing them will eventually become a pity.
So big and beautiful~
Shi'er writes well!
You are very suitable for ancient words
Seeing this makes me feel even more good at cooking
Ah, I'm going to cheer up (~￣▽￣)~
The writing style is great, and the suspense in the story is also great~
But I didn't quite understand the ending QAQ
Hello, I am Wen Erjian from Shicheng Studio. What you asked for is a short review, and we will place an order for you now.
I originally thought the beginning was just a story about monsters, but then I suddenly understood something later. Such a suspense is good, but I don't know what it will look like when written into a full-length novel. Could the willow tree be the sleeping Miss Liu? You can try to write a long novel. This kind of feeling is more suitable for a novel with a word count of 50,000 to 100,000 words. If it is more, it will have no charm.
And if this article is expanded well, it can also be written from the perspective of a scholar. I believe there will be a different feeling, but the current willow perspective is already very good.
Although it is a tragedy, it is not necessarily a comedy. The range gap between tragedy and comedy is not so clear.
The author's description is also good, but it lacks some ancient meaning. It seems to be somewhere between the ancient style and the modern feeling. It is a little weird. I hope to add more words with ancient meaning. This will not only enrich the entire writing style, but also increase the favorability of those who like to read ancient style.
When writing a long novel, it is very important to choose a very meaningful name. If it were just called "Red Bean", I am afraid that few people would click in. After all, people who like ancient styles are so eager for ancient meanings.
Finally, I hope that the long story will come out, and I hope that my suggestions can give you some help.
Finally, I am Wen Erjian from Shicheng Studio. Welcome to visit me next time.
So Hongdou is Xiangsi, the eldest lady of the Liu family, right? What the scholar likes is the willow tree, which is the eldest lady, but they don't know each other. Missing them will eventually become a pity.
So big and beautiful~
Shi'er writes well! You are very suitable for ancient words Seeing this makes me feel even more good at cooking Ah, I'm going to cheer up (~￣▽￣)~
The writing style is great, and the suspense in the story is also great~ But I didn't quite understand the ending QAQ
Hello, I am Wen Erjian from Shicheng Studio. What you asked for is a short review, and we will place an order for you now. I originally thought the beginning was just a story about monsters, but then I suddenly understood something later. Such a suspense is good, but I don't know what it will look like when written into a full-length novel. Could the willow tree be the sleeping Miss Liu? You can try to write a long novel. This kind of feeling is more suitable for a novel with a word count of 50,000 to 100,000 words. If it is more, it will have no charm. And if this article is expanded well, it can also be written from the perspective of a scholar. I believe there will be a different feeling, but the current willow perspective is already very good. Although it is a tragedy, it is not necessarily a comedy. The range gap between tragedy and comedy is not so clear. The author's description is also good, but it lacks some ancient meaning. It seems to be somewhere between the ancient style and the modern feeling. It is a little weird. I hope to add more words with ancient meaning. This will not only enrich the entire writing style, but also increase the favorability of those who like to read ancient style. When writing a long novel, it is very important to choose a very meaningful name. If it were just called "Red Bean", I am afraid that few people would click in. After all, people who like ancient styles are so eager for ancient meanings. Finally, I hope that the long story will come out, and I hope that my suggestions can give you some help. Finally, I am Wen Erjian from Shicheng Studio. Welcome to visit me next time.