The Major General Is a Handsome God

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Allinall,

Damn, I can only support you so far. I'm so sorry. Tangtang, keep up the good work. I have to struggle in three dimensions

Looks great, cheers!

Also, I think Tang Jin's action when killing the corpse... Is so cool, hahaha! !

The pace is too fast.

School has started these days and there are a lot of things going on. I finally have some time today. First of all, congratulations on joining v. Secondly, let me tell you some of my thoughts on this article so far. Well, let me first state that these are just some of my own ideas for reference only. Generally speaking, this article is very cute, and the attributes of the protagonist are also very cute, but the character of the protagonist feels a bit childish. I think it may have something to do with the author's age. I guess the author is no more than 20 years old. In addition, I will talk about some unreasonable details. 1. Tang Jin has to pay 100 million credit points to join the army. This is a little unscientific. The article also said that this is a war era. Joining the army is to fight for your life, not to go sightseeing. Not to mention that the state provides subsidies, why do you still charge so much money? From ancient times to the present, there has been no need to pay fees to become a soldier. I know that Da Da wants to give Xiao Gong some hardship, but when I think about it carefully, this is too unreasonable. 2. As for the female setting in the article, after getting married, the female must completely obey the male and her fate seems to be bumpy. Females can join the army, join politics, and hold high-ranking positions. Isn't there a female with status who can come forward to reform? Moreover, there are only a few females. Since there are fewer people, they must be more precious. You must know that females are responsible for reproduction, and no matter which species, it is impossible to ignore this problem. In short, the status and situation of females cannot withstand scrutiny. 3. Regarding Xiao Shou's father, forgive me for forgetting his name ╮(╯▽╰)╭, and the question of his whitewashing, why do you want to whitewash him? And he was so clean that people were speechless. He was a lieutenant general. He had a lot of troops and was very prestigious. He acted like this to protect his wife. Was he really a lieutenant general? 4. Regarding the lieutenant colonel (or senior colonel? Forgot) who coveted Xiao Shou, Xiao Shou seemed very passive when he was harassed. This is unscientific. I know the author wanted to make Xiao Shou's situation more embarrassing, but this is slightly inconsistent. How could a major general, who was also a general because of his military merit, appear passive in front of a school-level officer? Don't talk about family, you must know that Xiao Shou's father is also a lieutenant general, and that lieutenant colonel's father is also a lieutenant general. It feels as if Xiao Shou's father's lieutenant general rank is like Chinese cabbage, without any gold content. 5. Regarding the emotional development of Gong Shou and how Xiao Gong struggled, this should have been the highlight, but the author did not write much about it. Uh... There are a few more, I forgot about them, I'll talk about them when I remember them. Of course, I have to reiterate that the above is purely a personal opinion. I hope you write better and better

If a lieutenant general is bad, then he is bad. Why did he get clean and pay so much, but now his son and wife are both gone? It would be uncomfortable to see his wife remarry. . . . .

Hey, every time I see the unscientific method of childbirth in the article, I worry about it. The doctor doesn't recommend shouting out when giving birth naturally. It will take up extra energy. Generally, I am told not to shout but to use force.

Tangtang, come on! (O^^)oo(^^o)