Simply put, it's the heroine's long road to revenge, with a man accidentally coming home with her along the way~
This story has some slight OOC (I think it's only slight...), and a little Mary Sue (maybe; I don't really understand what people mean by Mary Sue). If you don't like it, click X. Comments with zero-star ratings and all kinds of feedback are welcome, including pointing out typos. I won't accept random attacks.
The heroine is an original character, paired with Su Su, and it has a happy ending. Fans of the boss can click X now, but please don't attack me just because the pairing isn't with the boss.
Since the author is in her final year of high school, I can only update one chapter every three days. Feel free to wait until there's more to read.
In this story, Zi Yin is Zi Ying. Characters from Chinese Paladin 4 and Gu Jian 2 make cameo appearances.
Does the author need to abuse the heroine in any way? The male protagonist is useless at all. Are you simply raising a son again? Help him think about everything and think about it for him. I don't know what to write.
I don't quite understand. The heroine didn't say anything when the witch asked her about the mark. After the mark was written, she felt it was too eye-catching and was unwilling to do so. Isn't this inconsistent? She also said that she has the best concealment ability. The location of the mark is so obvious that it would be weird even if she is wearing a bandage. Doesn't it increase the chance of exposure?
Is Sangluo there again?
It looks very nice~ But it would look much better if there is a blank line before each paragraph~
It's too long, and there is too little interaction between Luoluo and Shaoxia. They are not husbands who support each other, they are just raising a younger brother.
Sang Luo's injury will heal! Dear, please write more articles.
It feels so cruel to the heroine! The whole family died and I was tortured to death╮(╯▽╰)╭It's so miserable!
Actually, I would rather read the Lin Hao fan novel in The Return of the Daughter of Gold. Is it possible to write one?
When will the author update?
Does the author need to abuse the heroine in any way? The male protagonist is useless at all. Are you simply raising a son again? Help him think about everything and think about it for him. I don't know what to write.
I don't quite understand. The heroine didn't say anything when the witch asked her about the mark. After the mark was written, she felt it was too eye-catching and was unwilling to do so. Isn't this inconsistent? She also said that she has the best concealment ability. The location of the mark is so obvious that it would be weird even if she is wearing a bandage. Doesn't it increase the chance of exposure?
Is Sangluo there again?
It looks very nice~ But it would look much better if there is a blank line before each paragraph~
It's too long, and there is too little interaction between Luoluo and Shaoxia. They are not husbands who support each other, they are just raising a younger brother.
Sang Luo's injury will heal! Dear, please write more articles.
It feels so cruel to the heroine! The whole family died and I was tortured to death╮(╯▽╰)╭It's so miserable!
Actually, I would rather read the Lin Hao fan novel in The Return of the Daughter of Gold. Is it possible to write one?
Hey, happy new year! Lots of updates