Clear Skies

I still really like Dawn. Apart from the fact that the subject is called by his first name everywhere, the story is still wonderful, warm and beautiful. When it comes to the haze, I can't stand that type of sentence structure, and the article is beginning to show a "tossing" phenomenon, and it lacks a lot of the warm feeling in the morning light. After reading "Qingkong", I really understood a Northeastern dialect word "Mochi" that I don't know how to describe. The adults have always stated, "There is no copywriting, I write whatever comes to mind, there is no protagonist, everything is the protagonist." I wish I had to mention it in the notes at the end of each chapter. Why? Even if you don't have copywriting, you should have an idea, right? If you don't have an idea, you should always know what you want to say, right? However, I really can't tell at all. The plot is too slow to find the main theme, and the priorities are seriously unclear. Conspiracy or not, foreshadowing or not, what should be highlighted is not highlighted. What should not be elaborated on is emphasized with all the strength. At first I thought you were going to make it funny to the end, so the whole family kept going back and forth, everyone wanted to write and no one wanted to fall behind. However, it seems that is not the case at all~ It's just a toss-up of changing the scene and changing the characters, but the results are almost the same. Repeating a farce on the same farce may seem funny, but it really makes you boring after watching it too much. Later, I had to use more unexplained plots to force it back, trying to make a profound meaning. However, I have to say that this is really a bit of a failure. A farce is a farce. Whether it involves hatred between the country and the family or blood and tears, it cannot take away its inherent nature. I just hope that you, adults, will not be in a hurry to open a new pit, and think carefully about what kind of story you want to write. Also look back at the other articles. Although the three articles are about different people and different things, I feel that the characters are all familiar. The tone of speaking and the way of thinking are all the same. Nowadays, apart from the changes in the subject of calling people by their first names, other aspects such as awkward rhetoric and sentence patterns, long paragraphs of direct narration or description like narration, have not improved much. Some people may say that this is the author's style, and some may jump out and say, "If you don't like reading it, don't read it." However, I have to say that if things continue like this and you, sir, fall into your own routine and are unable to extricate yourself, the readability of the article will be greatly reduced. The above are some of my opinions after reading the adult article. It may be too straightforward and conflicting, but I still want to say it. It is precisely because I love Chenxi that I don't want to see adults fall into the same trap and continue on the road of "torturing" I offend you so much, please forgive me

Xiaoliu is very pure and loving, although she is very cunning.

Speechless Reader is really depressed. Hehe. It looks okay to me. Because the composition has never passed the test, Of course, Zhou Da, I am not belittling you. It's not like Zhou Da has never thought about revising his writing style and sentences, but there are too many horrible messages on the other side of Chenxi, haha Thank you to the silent readers for liking Chen Xi and for liking Zhou Da's articles as much as I do. Ha ha

The ending is still unfinished, I want to see the infrastructure

Hehe…

The ending is a bit bland...

Poor Black Tiger, you are so persistent.

The eloquent words between the lines have the flavor of a Chinese fairy tale…

It looks great after downloading it ~ Bonus points

Not bad, but this guy is so lucky