[Kuroko's Basketball] On the Coexistence of Chuunibyou and □□

Akashi turned out to be O_o

Danmei. . ?? Exm??

-_-||Your article is Qingshui Wen, not Plato, okay!

Hello, author~ Here is Daihua serving you√ Because I will be very busy when school starts after the new year, this review has been delayed for a bit long. I hope the author can forgive me ~ This article written by the author is a fan of Black Basket. When I read it in the store, I picked it up without hesitation. After I clicked on it, I found it was a short story, and I didn't spend much time reading it. There are also some opinions and suggestions here. If there are any shortcomings, please forgive me. T_T At the beginning of this article, I think the author grasped it very well and played an appropriate leading role. Akashi met Natsukawa because of a painting, and then narrated the next development of the plot. It can be said that it is a very novel and interesting way to successfully start the article. An appropriate beginning will play a big role in the development of the plot. The author grasped this point very accurately. Thumbs up⊙▽⊙ Since it is a short story, some plot must be sacrificed to focus on the emotional development of the two people. And I think the author didn't grasp the relationship very well. I always felt that the progress of the two of them was too fast. After a few chapters, the two of them were so inexplicably together? This kind of relationship still seems too blunt and abrupt. It is recommended that the author add a transition period in this aspect and make some appropriate buffers so that the relationship between the two develops in a logical manner instead of making people feel too jumpy. The author is very good at depicting details, and this is also reflected in the protagonist Natsu Chuan. The author has created the character of Natsu Chuan very vividly in the narration between the lines, and successfully perfectly demonstrated the unusualness in painting and the emotional attachment to Akashi. However, in comparison, Akashi does not seem to be very outstanding, which is reflected in the character creation. After reading the whole story, I felt that Akashi was very bland, and it was the same kind of unchanging blandness. After the plot ended, Akashi's character still tended to be the same as it was at the beginning. In the original work, Akashi already had a second personality when he was in the third grade of junior high school. This is a completely different personality and concept from the past Akashi. However, the author's article does not reflect this and does not create what the author thinks. However, I still think that the author still needs to put more effort into shaping the characters. He can refer more to the plots in TV or comics and try to make the characters more consistent with the original work. The above are all my views on this article. The author's writing style has basically become mature, and he still needs to work on some details. I don't know if the author has the idea of ​​opening up a new pit. I am looking forward to seeing the author's next article. Please come on! Yunge Changpingpu——Chrysanthemum

What a heartwarming ride~o(≧v≦)o

Is it the Red Army attacking? ⊙▽⊙

It's over… I've saved this article for less than two hours… It's over… Well~~ Anyway… Spread the flowers (?)

Updated, ~\\(≧▽≦)/~la la la

It's super cute and the setting is awesome! It's worth millions of dollars! Collect