[Harry Potter] Queen of the Night

Why has this card been stuck for several years?

It's been 16 years, haven't you updated yet?

However, I didn't find the author after I posted the long comment (╬▔plate▔) Hurry up! Hurry up! If you have the ability to open a hole, you have the ability to fill it! You have the ability to use your imagination and update!

I've been following this article for a long time, and to be honest, it's past the love stage. From scanning it several times a day at the beginning, it only takes a week or two before I even think of taking a look. From being crazy about why it hasn't been updated to now calmly thinking that it really hasn't been updated, it only took half a year. When I first started following this article, I was still a little white flower, not as rotten as it is now, so I took a stab at it. If I had just discovered it now, I probably wouldn't be doing this. This is also a kind of fate, isn't it? Most HP fans are danmei, there are very few BG fans, and even fewer are well-written. But I think this article is probably one of those rare things. I have to say that the author is very attentive and the writing is very good, but it is not perfect. The author quoted some words from the original work, but the original work was written by a British person after all. Even with the polish of translation, it still shows the difference from the Chinese novel. This is the difference between Chinese and foreign cultures. It's not impossible to quote, but it's better to express it in your own words, which may make it easier for readers to understand. In addition, I admit that this article is very good, but the style of writing still needs to be paid attention to. I don't think it's a good idea to have too many variations in style within an article. At least that's the case in the text. The appearance of relaxed, literary and original style in the same chapter will make people feel caught off guard. In the extra chapters, you can change the style, and it will also make readers feel brighter. Then there's the writing. There's something gothic about it, which is nice considering the setting of the article - Western fantasy. However, it is better to use Chinese popular words as little as possible. Readers such as "guliang" can certainly understand it, but it does not fit the general context. The wording is relatively appropriate, and it is literary but not pretentious. This is what I appreciate most. In fact, as long as the writing is good enough, even if the article is not my favorite type, I can still read it. Then there's the content. The heroine is a bit versatile, but the vampire queen is a bit too cool. And I have seen thousands of protagonists (male and female) assigned to Voldemort. It's not that it's bad, it's just that I've seen so much that I don't catch a cold. Okay I admit my taste is a bit tricky, but it really wasn't noticeable. The plot direction is also a bit unnatural, as if it was deliberately arranged this way. The characters are a bit OOC, for example, Snape's image is slightly white, and he is a gentle and loving professor. Even though I have read a lot of HP fanfiction, I rarely see it. Even if the protagonist is Lily's daughter and looks a little like her, it's a bit too much. Last but not least, should the copywriting be changed? The writing is very ordinary and featureless. And it also gives people the feeling of a thunderous Mary Sue. Maybe some people just cross right up without looking at it. I think copywriting should be very important. Others' first impression of an article is obtained from the copywriting. There are indeed readers who don't read the copy, but I don't think that's the case for everyone. There are definitely benefits to making your copy more engaging. I am only fourteen years old, and I am not an author or a genius. If you have a different opinion or think what I say is not pleasant, please forgive me. This is my first time to post a long comment, and I don't know if the method and format are correct. Please forgive me if there are any mistakes. The author hasn't updated for a long time, and I don't know when I can see it, but I still want to say: please update! PS: In the past, I just wanted to be cute and beg for updates, and I didn't post any constructive comments. Today, I took advantage of the summer vacation to post them together. If I feel that my tone is different from before, I would have to say that I think it is better to be more serious when giving advice to others. PPS: If there are typos or sentences that don't make sense, I can only say sorry.

Who are you, the author? More updates?

I've been waiting for a semester. . . . . The bitterness of waiting from winter vacation to summer vacation. . . . . Who are you, the author??? Where are people??? Missing??? I have sold it so many times without any limit, how can I pay back the cuteness! No! Even! New! Isn't there one flower that has been sprinkled so many times? Point! Feel! Move! I can't wait to drop the keyboard! I have reviewed the plot over and over again! Looking at my long series of exclamation marks, don't you have the slightest desire to update? Well, I'll make it even better if I try to be cute o(≧ω≦)o Roll around...~(~O￣▽￣)~o . . . Rolling around... O~(_△_o~) ~. . . (

Will I know when it will be updated? Will there be any updates?

Especially for the appetite. . . .

An author who hasn't updated in half a month. . . . ▄┻┳═

I grabbed a little time to surf the Internet. Hey <(￣￣)> See if I still take some time out of the pitiful time to rush for more? Are you a little touched? I'm so busy with school o(￣ヘ￣o#)