In the twenty-first century, she was the heiress to a wealthy family, cherished like the apple of their eye.
After a plane crash, she transmigrates to the war-torn era of the Three Kingdoms.
Transmigrating into a turbulent age, she loses her family and home, faces a winding path in love, and even becomes a temptress blamed for bringing a nation to ruin.
"Quan, if I accidentally do something to betray you, will you forgive me?"
"I will never forgive anyone who betrays me, especially you, Wan'er. Do you understand?"
If there are three thousand handsome men, she loves only one.
But with three thousand waters before him, can he drink from only one cup for her?
P.S. This story is set during the Three Kingdoms period and tells a legendary romance from history. However, since the story requires it, please forgive any parts that don't match the historical record.
P.P.S. The story gets a little angsty later on.
P.P.P.S. If you like it, don't forget to bookmark it~~ Leave your thoughts, don't just silently drift by~~~ This young lady thanks you in advance
I'm very sorry for taking so long to comment~ Guliang said that he hopes a power supply who understands ancient Chinese can help comment. Although I don't understand it very well, I will try my best to find out the problem~
First, let's talk about the arrangement of the story itself. This article by Gu Liang is a historical novel with the background of the Three Kingdoms. According to Gu Liang's introduction, the content is the love story between Sun Quan, the lord of Soochow, and his beloved concubine, Mrs. Bu. The opening of this article is that the heroine travels through time and encounters a bully who snatches her bride. Fortunately, a hero saves the beauty. This seems to be the beginning of a very normal love story, but the person who appears is not Sun Quan, the male protagonist of Guliang, but Liu Bei, another hero in the Three Kingdoms. Much of the story then revolves around Liu Bei, and there are even different feelings between the two parties. Although Gu Liang also inserted some foreshadowings, such as the heroine's jade pendant and the portrait Zhuge Liang saw in Sun Quan's study, the story still unfolds around Liu Bei. The focus of Gu Liang's description is also on Liu Bei, and the male protagonist is not introduced as soon as possible. On the one hand, it increases the role of supporting characters, and on the other hand, it reduces the presence of the male protagonist. This has to be said to be a mistake of this article.
Next, let's talk about the style of writing. Looking at Gu Liang's writing, it is not difficult to find that Gu Liang has mastered a certain vocabulary, but he is not yet good at applying it. The composition of a sentence cannot be just a pile of words. The sentences must be smooth to convey the author's meaning well. The current problem of Guliang is that the sentences are too complex. Some words that are not originally used are used in pursuit of visual effects or the author's "beauty", which will make the sentences themselves seem cumbersome and even distract from the main topic. We all know that the three elements of a novel are time, place, and characters. Simply combined, it means "someone does something at a certain place at a certain time." Gu Liang had previously described Liu Bei's sword dance, so the focus of this description should be, "where Liu Bei danced his sword" rather than "what kind of sword Liu Bei danced under what kind of tree." Figure out the composition of sentences so that you can write simple and clear sentences. Articles exist for people to read, not for people to find it difficult to read.
As for the characters, the characters of the Three Kingdoms have their own charm. As long as they are written according to historical facts and processed by the author's own art, the characters will be quite three-dimensional and full. I hope Gu Liang can think more about this aspect and shape the characters better.
All in all, Gu Liang's article can be described in one word: overwhelming. Guliang pays too much attention to some trivial things and ignores the real subject. There seems to be no problem when writing now, but when the number of words increases, problems will slowly emerge. There is an idiom called "The tail is too big to fall off", which refers to this situation.
There are two main problems with Guliang right now. One is that he can't grasp the focus, and the other is that he doesn't know how to write. For the former, Gu Liang can try to write some short stories of several thousand words to practice writing and try to grasp the rhythm of the story; for the latter, I suggest Gu Liang write this article well, the more words, the better. There are no shortcuts to writing; only constant practice can help you master true storytelling skills.
Here's wishing Guliang a Happy New Year in advance, and I hope my writing can improve greatly in the new year! Come on!
I hope my long review can bring some help to your writing.
Illegal gathering | Changpingpu
BY rice
Come on, lemon~
Why do I suddenly feel that the heroine is so artistic?,,
Come on come on! Praise for the writing style
It's well written. I just want to give you a suggestion. One chapter should preferably be 3,000 words, which will help with points.
Please sort out the typesetting. It will be much more comfortable for readers, little angels~
The writing is good~ Come on!
Looks like a pretty good sample paper
This is the most innovative and gorgeous time travel I have ever seen!
The heroine is so domineering. I like this kind of heroine. She has both strength and softness.
Haha, it is indeed Liu Bei! Suddenly I feel like these two people are a good match
I'm very sorry for taking so long to comment~ Guliang said that he hopes a power supply who understands ancient Chinese can help comment. Although I don't understand it very well, I will try my best to find out the problem~ First, let's talk about the arrangement of the story itself. This article by Gu Liang is a historical novel with the background of the Three Kingdoms. According to Gu Liang's introduction, the content is the love story between Sun Quan, the lord of Soochow, and his beloved concubine, Mrs. Bu. The opening of this article is that the heroine travels through time and encounters a bully who snatches her bride. Fortunately, a hero saves the beauty. This seems to be the beginning of a very normal love story, but the person who appears is not Sun Quan, the male protagonist of Guliang, but Liu Bei, another hero in the Three Kingdoms. Much of the story then revolves around Liu Bei, and there are even different feelings between the two parties. Although Gu Liang also inserted some foreshadowings, such as the heroine's jade pendant and the portrait Zhuge Liang saw in Sun Quan's study, the story still unfolds around Liu Bei. The focus of Gu Liang's description is also on Liu Bei, and the male protagonist is not introduced as soon as possible. On the one hand, it increases the role of supporting characters, and on the other hand, it reduces the presence of the male protagonist. This has to be said to be a mistake of this article. Next, let's talk about the style of writing. Looking at Gu Liang's writing, it is not difficult to find that Gu Liang has mastered a certain vocabulary, but he is not yet good at applying it. The composition of a sentence cannot be just a pile of words. The sentences must be smooth to convey the author's meaning well. The current problem of Guliang is that the sentences are too complex. Some words that are not originally used are used in pursuit of visual effects or the author's "beauty", which will make the sentences themselves seem cumbersome and even distract from the main topic. We all know that the three elements of a novel are time, place, and characters. Simply combined, it means "someone does something at a certain place at a certain time." Gu Liang had previously described Liu Bei's sword dance, so the focus of this description should be, "where Liu Bei danced his sword" rather than "what kind of sword Liu Bei danced under what kind of tree." Figure out the composition of sentences so that you can write simple and clear sentences. Articles exist for people to read, not for people to find it difficult to read. As for the characters, the characters of the Three Kingdoms have their own charm. As long as they are written according to historical facts and processed by the author's own art, the characters will be quite three-dimensional and full. I hope Gu Liang can think more about this aspect and shape the characters better. All in all, Gu Liang's article can be described in one word: overwhelming. Guliang pays too much attention to some trivial things and ignores the real subject. There seems to be no problem when writing now, but when the number of words increases, problems will slowly emerge. There is an idiom called "The tail is too big to fall off", which refers to this situation. There are two main problems with Guliang right now. One is that he can't grasp the focus, and the other is that he doesn't know how to write. For the former, Gu Liang can try to write some short stories of several thousand words to practice writing and try to grasp the rhythm of the story; for the latter, I suggest Gu Liang write this article well, the more words, the better. There are no shortcuts to writing; only constant practice can help you master true storytelling skills. Here's wishing Guliang a Happy New Year in advance, and I hope my writing can improve greatly in the new year! Come on! I hope my long review can bring some help to your writing. Illegal gathering | Changpingpu BY rice
Come on, lemon~
Why do I suddenly feel that the heroine is so artistic?,,
Come on come on! Praise for the writing style
It's well written. I just want to give you a suggestion. One chapter should preferably be 3,000 words, which will help with points. Please sort out the typesetting. It will be much more comfortable for readers, little angels~
The writing is good~ Come on!
Looks like a pretty good sample paper
This is the most innovative and gorgeous time travel I have ever seen!
The heroine is so domineering. I like this kind of heroine. She has both strength and softness.
Haha, it is indeed Liu Bei! Suddenly I feel like these two people are a good match