I felt that the ending was a bit rushed, and it felt like the story ended when it shouldn't have been finished. It would have been nice if I wrote a little more later. The ending was too depressing, but the article was still good, haha...
The author of fdfd replied:
What does fdfd mean?
Stroking along the hair = v = Looking forward to the "perverted" performance ~
I always feel that the beads are not reliable. What if I accidentally drop them in the future? Or was it stolen? That's not even one plus or one gear!
Is this okay?~ It's too powerful~~~~~~~
Hey hey... How can you occupy my sofa... Mom silently.
=-=
Continue to support adults.
When will you come back?
Author, please keep updating the article~
Looking forward to ING...
Maybe Chino-chan is not from Earth, right? Right? Everything about him feels weird! The decorative knife that cannot be pulled out, strange powers, hair color change, and enhanced abilities. I always feel like I smell a conspiracy
I feel like the emotional scenes between the two of them are not enough.
Obviously Chen Tian is much better than this scumbag Shen Ge, let's change the attack
It would be great if I could really go back and herd sheep with my grandma.
I want to see Xiao Cao's life as a rural wife ^ ^
The character's personality is completely out of shape.
The heroine is also a mess. Think you are the savior? Do you think war and all that blood and damage are all games?
If you can't write a good heroine at all, then don't write a seed. The original characters were so distinct, but as a result, each one's IQ was suppressed by several levels. Is it so interesting to belittle the characters of the original work to set up a heroine of your own creation?
If you must describe the characters, I advise the author to at least read the official novel a few times.
Although Fleur was selfish, she eventually repented. Kira and she use each other, but are responsible for Fleur's desire to protect. It's just a relationship that failed to succeed in the end; after experiencing the vicissitudes of life, Kira's love for Lux became gentle and firm; Aslan and Cagalli encouraged each other but eventually had to move to different futures under the pressure of reality and care about each other...
These are all very obvious.
But you, the author, ruined it all.
The war and the helplessness and sorrow have become the heroine's game. The love in it is not that deep at all, it is just a fairy tale in the head of the heroine or the author. Even if the original work doesn't have enough war descriptions, it at least has successful character descriptions. Here, it's just an article that can't even be considered a successful romance.
What's next? When will the veil of ambiguity be lifted?
Rating, I wonder when the next update will be...
Please update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
IM does not have MSG, because MSG was invented by Little Japan during World War II,,,,,,,,, and if you eat too much MSG, you will lose your hair and get cancer. Especially when MSG is exposed to high temperatures, its molecules will change and secrete toxic substances, so now Little Japan no longer uses MSG.
Why can't I hold the college entrance examination? T T
The one who supports Heiji the most is hoho...
So I'll keep updating~
Expect......
I felt that the ending was a bit rushed, and it felt like the story ended when it shouldn't have been finished. It would have been nice if I wrote a little more later. The ending was too depressing, but the article was still good, haha...
The author of fdfd replied: What does fdfd mean?
Stroking along the hair = v = Looking forward to the "perverted" performance ~
I always feel that the beads are not reliable. What if I accidentally drop them in the future? Or was it stolen? That's not even one plus or one gear!
Is this okay?~ It's too powerful~~~~~~~
Hey hey... How can you occupy my sofa... Mom silently. =-= Continue to support adults. When will you come back?
Author, please keep updating the article~ Looking forward to ING...
Maybe Chino-chan is not from Earth, right? Right? Everything about him feels weird! The decorative knife that cannot be pulled out, strange powers, hair color change, and enhanced abilities. I always feel like I smell a conspiracy
I feel like the emotional scenes between the two of them are not enough.
Obviously Chen Tian is much better than this scumbag Shen Ge, let's change the attack
It would be great if I could really go back and herd sheep with my grandma. I want to see Xiao Cao's life as a rural wife ^ ^
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The character's personality is completely out of shape. The heroine is also a mess. Think you are the savior? Do you think war and all that blood and damage are all games? If you can't write a good heroine at all, then don't write a seed. The original characters were so distinct, but as a result, each one's IQ was suppressed by several levels. Is it so interesting to belittle the characters of the original work to set up a heroine of your own creation? If you must describe the characters, I advise the author to at least read the official novel a few times. Although Fleur was selfish, she eventually repented. Kira and she use each other, but are responsible for Fleur's desire to protect. It's just a relationship that failed to succeed in the end; after experiencing the vicissitudes of life, Kira's love for Lux became gentle and firm; Aslan and Cagalli encouraged each other but eventually had to move to different futures under the pressure of reality and care about each other... These are all very obvious. But you, the author, ruined it all. The war and the helplessness and sorrow have become the heroine's game. The love in it is not that deep at all, it is just a fairy tale in the head of the heroine or the author. Even if the original work doesn't have enough war descriptions, it at least has successful character descriptions. Here, it's just an article that can't even be considered a successful romance.
What's next? When will the veil of ambiguity be lifted?
Rating, I wonder when the next update will be...
Please update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
IM does not have MSG, because MSG was invented by Little Japan during World War II,,,,,,,,, and if you eat too much MSG, you will lose your hair and get cancer. Especially when MSG is exposed to high temperatures, its molecules will change and secrete toxic substances, so now Little Japan no longer uses MSG.
Why can't I hold the college entrance examination? T T
The one who supports Heiji the most is hoho... So I'll keep updating~