
The Man in the Trench Coat
穿风衣的男人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 85k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 11y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
65Chapters
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7.0Score
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It doesn't count as pouring out negative energy. You didn't complain about anyone, right? The psychological narration at the end makes this article feel more like a spiritual communication with my wife, although this is purely fantasy. After all, I only have a literal understanding of spiritual communication. I sincerely wish my wife good health and a happy life~
1. About this chapter The plot of the parallel universe is really cruel... 2. About this article In fact, I don't particularly love this article (the best and second in my mind are still "Gold" and "Holy Comedy"), maybe it's because it's a bit longer? I feel like the rhythm is not as good as those two articles... But about the chapter I really like to finish, it's really amazing. It flipped Neil's and Harvey's character settings very naturally... When Neil's evil deeds were exposed by Harvey, the hairs on his back really stood up! The most amazing thing is that it is super natural and unobtrusive... Ah, this is really the most amazing part of the whole article for me!
Etc…? (゚ロ゚ノ)ノWhere are the three incorrect views? ! Daming, who didn't think there was any problem at all, was confused...
So is Neil wearing it again? The previous reply from ys said that he traveled three times, and the previous article said that he stole three additional "things that can be worn back", which means it is possible... Neil can't remember clearly what happened three days ago, which is not reasonable. I think a person who often travels in time should remember time, at least some of the more important times and events...
There are frequent conversations in the article caused by single quotation marks... Do you think they have an ulterior motive?
Concluding congratulatory message! (Flower) I don't know where I posted my previous comments. I feel so stupid because I don't know how to post comments on the mobile version... The text is really cute! ! Even if I think about it under the sweet skin, the ending is still glass shards, which really makes me, who is crazy about be, infinitely happy (you (shut up, pervert)) In particular, I really like the way that the twenty questions implicitly point out that the follow-up is actually be! ! ! ! Looking forward to new articles! ! ! ! (Flowers!)
I spent an afternoon re-reading this article, and I feel like there is a lot I want to say. First of all, from my point of view, this is a very literary novel. If other Danmei in Jinjiang nowadays are handsome boys from Japan, Korea, Europe and the United States, my uncle's article has always given me the impression of an introverted and sensitive young man wearing black-rimmed glasses and a sweater, who is neither fashionable nor old-fashioned. Compared with other articles that try to stimulate the readers' senses, this article can almost be called a slow flow. The layout of the whole article is quite long. After reading it in one breath, I realized that there are echoes from beginning to end, and the various characters are not deliberately created differently. Let's talk about the characters. To be honest, at first I always wondered why Harvey didn't trust Neil so much after knowing that he was him. But after reading the full story today, I realized that Harvey actually trusted him. Is this love at first sight? To be honest, compared to other works that portray CP as trustworthy or even perfect to a certain extent (like me) or overemphasize the type of sinister elite, Nier makes me feel a different kind of good and bad from the first two. For example, his character, from the end, is really bad. The kind of evasion and lying that ordinary people hate makes people feel a little angry. Maybe it is because no one wants to admit the cowardly part of his character. I can't describe how good he is. After reading it, I just felt it was a feeling. Is it the same feeling for Harvey as an ordinary father? This feeling is that everything he does is for my (himself) good, and he will never kill me (himself), this sense of peace of mind and the sense of maturity of age. Was it this feeling that made Harvey accept Neil even after knowing everything? Generally speaking, the whole article feels very comfortable as it is written slowly, and there is no need to throw away the burden for no reason like a neurotic author. But some parts are a bit obscure for me, such as the medical events during it (after all, liberal arts students can't transfer it). In addition, although it is literary and artistic, my personal feeling is that the whole article feels a bit frigid (laughs). It would be better if some popular descriptions could be added. The above is my humble opinion, I hope the author doesn't care. In addition, I really think Neil is a brave person who loves life. If I feel that I have messed up something, then I will never want to go back to save it but think about how to die quickly to make everything disappear. So, no wonder Neil has a boyfriend! Ha ha!
It's actually the same thing to have no talent but wish you had it, and to be average-looking and wish you were more beautiful. I have always expected this, but I still wasted a lot of time. . . When I am in a better mood, I will convince myself that I am already very beautiful, at least not not beautiful at all, because if I am not beautiful at all, I may give up and happily eat all the fattening things.
Aiden can't be here anymore! ! This sentence is really cruel. There are few times in life when four beautiful things can be combined. The essence of life may not be happy. Du Kang is the only one who can relieve worries.
Well, being crazy about your idol when you were a teenager is indeed something you would despise when you are thirty years old. Very disdainful.