My Healing Boyfriend

I will also find my own Wu Yifan and encourage each other

I wanted to read a book I had read before, and then I turned to this one. The male protagonist's name is a bit sinister. It's not fun to call him "wu" (?????)

I like it! Feeling like a concubine who was whipped by the emperor? (Bushi)

The male protagonist's name collides with my classmate's name hahahaha

I was so drunk that the male protagonist's name persuaded me to quit.

This is a great article. In fact, I think I am also a little depressed. After reading this article, I feel that I can change and have the courage to do what I want to do.

Let me go, Song Kang's contrast

Damn, I like your writing very much. Can I hook up with you

Review - "Healing Boyfriend" Xinxing Literary AgencySummer ice cold powder I've been very busy lately, and this review has been delayed for a long time, so I'll just talk about it casually here. Mainly the causal logic of the article, the motivation behind the plot, as well as the design of the plot and the characters. Buddhism talks about karma, and the same applies to novels. Whatever the cause is, the result will be. Without a cause, there is no effect. The relationship between cause and effect is the main line of the article. This article has some inherent shortcomings in the causal connection. Without reading the full text, just reading the introduction, I felt that the main line of the article was a bit strange. In order to fulfill his sister's last wish, Wu Yifan, a wealthy and handsome CEO, used various methods to get close to the gloomy cartoonist otaku with a tendency to depression, so that he could get out of the trough of life and find himself again. The main events of the story are driven by my sister's last wish, which I can't understand. In my opinion, everything is in vain after death. If the male protagonist completes his sister's last wish, the sister will not know about it underground. In the name of the last wish, he pursues women in a serious manner. Emotionally, logically, and realistically, it feels a bit inconsistent. Regardless of which last wish, it would be more believable if the heroine went out once in a while, so that the hero was amazed and fascinated from then on. Of course, you can also find a male protagonist who is sunny on the outside but spiritual on the inside. He really likes the cartoons of this cartoonist with a gloomy temperament, and likes it to the extreme. However, the cartoonist often stops updating, and the male protagonist grinds his teeth after chasing after the cartoonist. Then he vows to collect the cartoonist, lock him in a dark room, punish him if he does not update, etc. So the male protagonist pretends to be shameless and starts to get close to the female protagonist. In this way, the development of the plot is reasonable and logical, and it will naturally be accepted by readers. In addition, after reading the full text, I personally feel that this love story as a whole is a kind of "utopian" love, with a strong ideal color and a feeling that it is somewhat out of touch with reality. It can satisfy the author, but it may not satisfy the reader. In addition to the last wish issue mentioned above, there is also the fake marriage, which personally feels a bit taken for granted. No matter how you look at it, you feel that the plot is deliberately designed to be a bit serious. And I think once the fake marriage came out, the author subconsciously realized that the male protagonist might not love the female protagonist as much as he imagined. The male protagonist mainly loves the female protagonist. What are the shining points in the female protagonist that make the male protagonist the heroine? It is said that the heroine suffers from depression, but from the beginning to the end, no matter how you look at it, you feel that the heroine is extremely normal, at most she is a pervert who is just a little nerdy. In the introduction, the character of the heroine is not reflected, the low point of the heroine's life is not reflected, and the heroine's lack of self is not reflected. Of course, what the male protagonist showed was just an ordinary way to pick up girls, and he didn't see any major impact or help on the heroine's character and destiny. If it were me, give me this plot, I would divide the plot into three parts. The first part is about a gloomy female cartoonist who especially likes tragic, bloody and cruel endings. She has been complained by readers many times, and was even warned by the editor to hide her work. The work needs to be rectified. The female cartoonist would rather die than cooperate, and then the family tragedy occurs. The heroine has no hope in life. She once wanted to seek death. She even left a message on the work saying that she no longer wanted to live, stopped drawing, and disappeared from play. This part reflects the heroine's career trough, life trough, and extremely depressed character. In the second part, the psychopathic male protagonist is madly in love with bloody comics, and discovers that his favorite comic is going extinct. He violently searches for the whereabouts of the cartoonist, and then finds the whereabouts of the female protagonist. The CEO has a younger brother. First of all, the younger brother comes to visit the heroine, sends gifts, flowers, throws money at her, and uses various methods to make the heroine unable to get in. She looks like she is dying and refuses to cooperate. The younger brother had no choice. The president was angry at the female protagonist for not cooperating. He toasted her and gave her a fine drink. He kidnapped the female protagonist and forced her to write. Then the female protagonist looked like she was waiting for death and refused to write. The male protagonist became even more angry and violently punished her. The female protagonist still refused to cooperate and sought death. The male protagonist panicked and found another way to find a way to unlock the female protagonist. In the third part, with the help of the male protagonist, the female protagonist finds the strength to live and to create. In the end, the female protagonist's paintings are full of hope. Although the bloody comics are no longer visible, the male protagonist is also influenced by love in the process of helping the female protagonist, and the two are together. So, HAPPY EDNING. Well, following the author's setting, I thought about it randomly. Author, you can compare it and see if the plot is more logical in this way. In my opinion, with such a design, the plot will have many ups and downs, which should attract more readers' attention. That's it for the comments. I hope it will be of some help to the author. Finally, a statement: The comments are only the opinions of one person and do not have official authority. It is also difficult to guarantee that they are comprehensive. If you feel that the comments are not well written, please laugh it off. Xinxing Literary AgencySummer ice cold powder

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