A Madman and a Fool
*The first-person narration, heroine's characterization, and some of the content were modified due to censorship. The story was also revised after completion, so please refer to the official version for the chapter text.
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The female protagonist is not strong at all. I feel bad for her. Alas, the plot setting is suspenseful. Alas, I hope the female protagonist is stronger and makes the male protagonist regret it. Don't just abuse the female protagonist.
Looking forward to Wang Luochuan, these two are not easy, so keep up the good work. If JJ could write h
2333333 I still remember the rabbit in Nanzhu. Summary? Hey, this is indeed a very bloody story, but I like Chen Jiaye very much. His character is really rare among CEOs, and the heroine is not the same. I said I wanted to write a normal story, but I was a little reluctant to do so.
Thank you to the author for the red envelope. I was very happy to receive it.
Ah, that's it. I'm really looking forward to Wang Luochuan, and he is indeed! ! !
By the way, these two extras are all about blah blah blah, and then crazy love...
||The author has worked hard to update the article. Let's refresh yourself with a diving bomb!
I don't know if it's a matter of watching it intermittently, I don't think I understand it either. First of all, is this Chen Xuan'er his uncle's stepdaughter? What's the relationship with Wang Luochuan? Are there really two Chen Xuan'er? If she was an uncle's stepdaughter, why was she raised by the Wang family? Is Chen Xuaner mentally ill? If there are two Chen Xuan'er, does Chen Jiaye love the one from the Wang family or the one from his uncle's stepdaughter? Which Chen Xuan'er died? Why did grandma accept Chen Xuan'er in the end?
First of all, DaDa, a thousand-word long review can be exchanged for extras and red envelopes, right? Since Dadai's Weibo promised to agree to an extra post by Nan Zhu, a friend who has been dismissed from the comments, then I want to read Wang Luochuan's extra, O(∩_∩)O
Now let's get to the main topic. The main topic is, I'm really sad for Dada. It's a good fake brother and sister article (actually, I don't think it's selfish, I think it's not a family. She is Uncle Nanzhu's stepdaughter). After writing more than 200,000 words, it was suddenly locked and asked to be revised. Dada's heart was filled with tears. It must be a breakdown. It seems that I have tried to change it many times but been rejected many times. My heart must be getting more and more broken. Maybe in my heart, the OST has not written tens of thousands of words, but more than 200,000 words. How can I break it if I have to change it before releasing the male and female protagonists...
I can only say that Dada is indeed a persistent person, which is why this article has been re-published. I would like to thank Dada for not giving up. It is really rare.
After seeing the ending, I was actually thinking, if the setting was still the original setting, how would it be written?
Let's first take a look at what adjustments DaDa has made to the text after changing the settings.
First, the Wang family is added because the heroine is in the Wang family.
Second, another "Chen Xuan'er" scene was added
Third, the role of the heroine's "current younger brother" Wang Luochuan was added.
In fact, I suddenly included so many things in the article. If others have not read the previous article, it will feel a bit confusing, because the network of relationships has become much more complicated. This is inevitable, but I still understand Dada very well, because Dada said that he wants to retain the original character and events, so I can definitely say Dada. It seems that I have racked my brains to make the current setting not too abrupt based on the original basis. For example, the heroine is threatened by the hero because of Gacan, such as the heroine's hatred of the hero, such as the heroine and the hero's childhood sweethearts, such as Nanzhu's love for the heroine... If these cannot be changed, there must be reasonable reasons.
But the addition of these characters and events really makes the whole story a lot more complicated, and the whole story is indeed not as smooth and readable as before (don't be angry, cough cough, I'm just talking about the facts.
Perhaps Dada knew in his heart that these problems would arise, but between retaining the character of the heroine of the plot and making the story more complicated, Dada still chose the former.
But, what if the setting remains the same, and the heroine and the hero are in the same family?
Then there is no such problem of having to find a reason.
It changed from the previous one to only cover the Chen family and the Li family, and then in the end the heroine got pregnant and Qiu Tianchu came to help. There was no mention of the grudges between the Wang family, Wang Luochuan and the heroine's previous generation.
In fact, I have read both the new and old versions, so I won't say much more. What I really want to know or speculate is, if the setting is still the same as before, will the heroine still go like this after returning from France?
Without her current brother Wang Luochuan, what should the heroine do? Will he become more dependent on Qiu Tian? (I think it will
Without those entanglements, what would happen to the relationship between the heroine and the hero? Will the heroine still have mental problems? (I don't think I can say for sure, because I often write about various snake diseases.
If the heroine was in the Chen family instead of the Wang family, then... Would it be easier for the heroine and the hero than it is now? (I think it may be simpler, because if the heroine is from the Chen family, she will not have Wang Luochuan to rely on, and can only listen to the Chen family.
The reason why I mention this is because I said that this is a series of articles, and the outline has been completely drawn up before, and the ending has been decided. If I hadn't been suddenly locked when I was writing this article, and I had to adjust the outline of the entire series, it wouldn't be what it is now. So... I asked DaDa to confirm. (Of course, if DaDa thinks there is something new and doesn't want to talk about the sad past anymore, o(╯□╰)o that's understandable. I'm just very curious to know.
Last but not least, I want to talk about Wang Luochuan. If it is a criticism that adding so many random things makes the article a bit messy, Wang Luochuan may be one of the highlights. I am very interested in him now, and I hope that the article with him as the male protagonist will be updated soon. I think he is indeed not a good person. Judging from the chair incident, his attitude towards his father's fiancée, the way he dealt with his father, his attitude towards Qiu Tian, and his words and deeds, he is a ruthless character. Do you feel that your feelings for the heroine are a little different? Am I evil? When Ga Chan was his younger brother, I felt quite pure... I really wanted to know his inner OST.
Come on! ! ! Looking forward to Dada's next work, don't forget the promised extras.
2333333333 Was laughed at by Nanzhu and cried
Ahhhhhhhhhhh, convulsions, I wrote a long comment with many words and it told me that I am not logged in, I can't comment, it crashed... So I will write it briefly, it really doesn't take too long, I'm sorry. But I really want to watch the extra chapter, and I hope it can fulfill my wish. ❤ Let me talk about some of my opinions after reading the last chapter. I know that my opinions may be different from those of everyone else, but please don't criticize me. The male protagonist is a good person. Although he has made the female protagonist suffer a lot, he is always the kindest of the three male protagonists in this article. He is always soft-hearted, which can be seen from his treatment of Gu Xiaofan and his family. So he was probably not the one who wanted to kill Qiu Tian in the end, he just prevented the situation from happening to this point, just like he did with Gu Xiaofan. This issue will be discussed later. The heroine is actually Gacan's sister. She has put herself into the role. When I saw my grandma saying that neuropathy is hereditary in both generations, I had not figured out the relationship between the characters of the previous generation (although I still don't know it yet, embarrassing), but through this sentence, I can basically see it. This incident also just explains why the heroine later substituted herself into Qiu Tian's description. She indeed had a mental problem. Now let's talk about our Luochuan, and I find that I'm really looking forward to him. The author describes him and his wife as two BTs, and the male protagonist also said that he admires but doesn't agree with the way he does things. I think it's because Luo Chuan is much more ruthless than the male protagonist. The heroine said she had doubts. What did she suspect? It was probably about Gu Xiaofan's incident. (Since this article is written in the first person, many aspects of other people are profiled, so I wrote a long review based on bold speculation. I will ask for confirmation in the future. And there is the mobile phone. Typing, I can't drag it to the front to read, there are a lot of things I want to change in front of it) I have listed these three things, the chair incident, the Gu Xiaofan incident (not sure), and the last incident. Although the male protagonist was involved, judging from the reaction of the male protagonist when he answered the phone, it was probably his idea to kill him. It can be seen that he is a ruthless character. Finally, there is another point that I think is quite interesting. From the last chapter, I felt that he had that kind of feeling for the heroine. The aunt knew that Luo Chuan was not the heroine's mother, and Luo Chuan should have known it for a long time. Hey, it's hard to explain, maybe I'm evil. I didn't feel this way when I watched Ga Chan and the heroine before. Finally, thank you for the big red envelope, and thank you for never giving up. The protagonist also has a happy ending. I hope that the author's article can be loved by more people, and that everyone who reads the article can feel warm and fond of it.
I don't understand where these two children came from!
The female protagonist is not strong at all. I feel bad for her. Alas, the plot setting is suspenseful. Alas, I hope the female protagonist is stronger and makes the male protagonist regret it. Don't just abuse the female protagonist.
Looking forward to Wang Luochuan, these two are not easy, so keep up the good work. If JJ could write h
2333333 I still remember the rabbit in Nanzhu. Summary? Hey, this is indeed a very bloody story, but I like Chen Jiaye very much. His character is really rare among CEOs, and the heroine is not the same. I said I wanted to write a normal story, but I was a little reluctant to do so.
Thank you to the author for the red envelope. I was very happy to receive it.
Ah, that's it. I'm really looking forward to Wang Luochuan, and he is indeed! ! ! By the way, these two extras are all about blah blah blah, and then crazy love... ||The author has worked hard to update the article. Let's refresh yourself with a diving bomb!
I don't know if it's a matter of watching it intermittently, I don't think I understand it either. First of all, is this Chen Xuan'er his uncle's stepdaughter? What's the relationship with Wang Luochuan? Are there really two Chen Xuan'er? If she was an uncle's stepdaughter, why was she raised by the Wang family? Is Chen Xuaner mentally ill? If there are two Chen Xuan'er, does Chen Jiaye love the one from the Wang family or the one from his uncle's stepdaughter? Which Chen Xuan'er died? Why did grandma accept Chen Xuan'er in the end?
First of all, DaDa, a thousand-word long review can be exchanged for extras and red envelopes, right? Since Dadai's Weibo promised to agree to an extra post by Nan Zhu, a friend who has been dismissed from the comments, then I want to read Wang Luochuan's extra, O(∩_∩)O Now let's get to the main topic. The main topic is, I'm really sad for Dada. It's a good fake brother and sister article (actually, I don't think it's selfish, I think it's not a family. She is Uncle Nanzhu's stepdaughter). After writing more than 200,000 words, it was suddenly locked and asked to be revised. Dada's heart was filled with tears. It must be a breakdown. It seems that I have tried to change it many times but been rejected many times. My heart must be getting more and more broken. Maybe in my heart, the OST has not written tens of thousands of words, but more than 200,000 words. How can I break it if I have to change it before releasing the male and female protagonists... I can only say that Dada is indeed a persistent person, which is why this article has been re-published. I would like to thank Dada for not giving up. It is really rare. After seeing the ending, I was actually thinking, if the setting was still the original setting, how would it be written? Let's first take a look at what adjustments DaDa has made to the text after changing the settings. First, the Wang family is added because the heroine is in the Wang family. Second, another "Chen Xuan'er" scene was added Third, the role of the heroine's "current younger brother" Wang Luochuan was added. In fact, I suddenly included so many things in the article. If others have not read the previous article, it will feel a bit confusing, because the network of relationships has become much more complicated. This is inevitable, but I still understand Dada very well, because Dada said that he wants to retain the original character and events, so I can definitely say Dada. It seems that I have racked my brains to make the current setting not too abrupt based on the original basis. For example, the heroine is threatened by the hero because of Gacan, such as the heroine's hatred of the hero, such as the heroine and the hero's childhood sweethearts, such as Nanzhu's love for the heroine... If these cannot be changed, there must be reasonable reasons. But the addition of these characters and events really makes the whole story a lot more complicated, and the whole story is indeed not as smooth and readable as before (don't be angry, cough cough, I'm just talking about the facts. Perhaps Dada knew in his heart that these problems would arise, but between retaining the character of the heroine of the plot and making the story more complicated, Dada still chose the former. But, what if the setting remains the same, and the heroine and the hero are in the same family? Then there is no such problem of having to find a reason. It changed from the previous one to only cover the Chen family and the Li family, and then in the end the heroine got pregnant and Qiu Tianchu came to help. There was no mention of the grudges between the Wang family, Wang Luochuan and the heroine's previous generation. In fact, I have read both the new and old versions, so I won't say much more. What I really want to know or speculate is, if the setting is still the same as before, will the heroine still go like this after returning from France? Without her current brother Wang Luochuan, what should the heroine do? Will he become more dependent on Qiu Tian? (I think it will Without those entanglements, what would happen to the relationship between the heroine and the hero? Will the heroine still have mental problems? (I don't think I can say for sure, because I often write about various snake diseases. If the heroine was in the Chen family instead of the Wang family, then... Would it be easier for the heroine and the hero than it is now? (I think it may be simpler, because if the heroine is from the Chen family, she will not have Wang Luochuan to rely on, and can only listen to the Chen family. The reason why I mention this is because I said that this is a series of articles, and the outline has been completely drawn up before, and the ending has been decided. If I hadn't been suddenly locked when I was writing this article, and I had to adjust the outline of the entire series, it wouldn't be what it is now. So... I asked DaDa to confirm. (Of course, if DaDa thinks there is something new and doesn't want to talk about the sad past anymore, o(╯□╰)o that's understandable. I'm just very curious to know. Last but not least, I want to talk about Wang Luochuan. If it is a criticism that adding so many random things makes the article a bit messy, Wang Luochuan may be one of the highlights. I am very interested in him now, and I hope that the article with him as the male protagonist will be updated soon. I think he is indeed not a good person. Judging from the chair incident, his attitude towards his father's fiancée, the way he dealt with his father, his attitude towards Qiu Tian, and his words and deeds, he is a ruthless character. Do you feel that your feelings for the heroine are a little different? Am I evil? When Ga Chan was his younger brother, I felt quite pure... I really wanted to know his inner OST. Come on! ! ! Looking forward to Dada's next work, don't forget the promised extras.
2333333333 Was laughed at by Nanzhu and cried
Ahhhhhhhhhhh, convulsions, I wrote a long comment with many words and it told me that I am not logged in, I can't comment, it crashed... So I will write it briefly, it really doesn't take too long, I'm sorry. But I really want to watch the extra chapter, and I hope it can fulfill my wish. ❤ Let me talk about some of my opinions after reading the last chapter. I know that my opinions may be different from those of everyone else, but please don't criticize me. The male protagonist is a good person. Although he has made the female protagonist suffer a lot, he is always the kindest of the three male protagonists in this article. He is always soft-hearted, which can be seen from his treatment of Gu Xiaofan and his family. So he was probably not the one who wanted to kill Qiu Tian in the end, he just prevented the situation from happening to this point, just like he did with Gu Xiaofan. This issue will be discussed later. The heroine is actually Gacan's sister. She has put herself into the role. When I saw my grandma saying that neuropathy is hereditary in both generations, I had not figured out the relationship between the characters of the previous generation (although I still don't know it yet, embarrassing), but through this sentence, I can basically see it. This incident also just explains why the heroine later substituted herself into Qiu Tian's description. She indeed had a mental problem. Now let's talk about our Luochuan, and I find that I'm really looking forward to him. The author describes him and his wife as two BTs, and the male protagonist also said that he admires but doesn't agree with the way he does things. I think it's because Luo Chuan is much more ruthless than the male protagonist. The heroine said she had doubts. What did she suspect? It was probably about Gu Xiaofan's incident. (Since this article is written in the first person, many aspects of other people are profiled, so I wrote a long review based on bold speculation. I will ask for confirmation in the future. And there is the mobile phone. Typing, I can't drag it to the front to read, there are a lot of things I want to change in front of it) I have listed these three things, the chair incident, the Gu Xiaofan incident (not sure), and the last incident. Although the male protagonist was involved, judging from the reaction of the male protagonist when he answered the phone, it was probably his idea to kill him. It can be seen that he is a ruthless character. Finally, there is another point that I think is quite interesting. From the last chapter, I felt that he had that kind of feeling for the heroine. The aunt knew that Luo Chuan was not the heroine's mother, and Luo Chuan should have known it for a long time. Hey, it's hard to explain, maybe I'm evil. I didn't feel this way when I watched Ga Chan and the heroine before. Finally, thank you for the big red envelope, and thank you for never giving up. The protagonist also has a happy ending. I hope that the author's article can be loved by more people, and that everyone who reads the article can feel warm and fond of it.
I don't understand where these two children came from!