[Soul Land + Jian Wang 3] Gun Soul, Sword Heart

Go to hell if you read the article or whatever! ! ! ! ! !

Damn, it's unscientific for Brother Pao, as a technical nerd, to not comment on the Zhuge Divine Crossbow.

The whole article is a mess. The idea is good but the logic of the writing is completely out of sync. It's also drunk.

The following is the number of characters, it's so simple, I can't complain

If you use the original work, you should also change the details. Some of the substituted plots appear in the original work. It's too strange. Is the author just copying and pasting?

Anyone who dares to play tricks on me, Dazangjian Villa, I will throw money at you.

Your article largely used the original work. I skipped it all the way. This article gave me the feeling that it is still the original formula, but with a few more male supporting characters. I have been wondering if the protagonist of this article is still Ye Yushen. The sense of existence is extremely low. Can an original plot be added? It is better to go back and watch Douluo Dalu. Many Douluo fanfics are because the original plot is pitiful and they use the original work to a large extent. Many people have abandoned it.

Dad, are you still there? Have you forgotten us(?д?;?)

Dear author, please update?

So their biggest trump card is Juyi Ling. . .