[Crossover] The Legend of Shu from the Lotus Lantern

I... Want... Text..._... Why don't I update it...

[Akimbo] [akimbo] [akimbo] [akimbo] [akimbo] [akimbo] [akimbo] I wonder how many days there are left to read←_← It took me a while to finally reach the temple, so I look forward to arriving soon in the evening. _(:з∠)_Small copy. . Calling

"The Imperial Master of the Immortal Dynasty" ←_←Abandoned the article within a few chapters The phrase "You are at the end of the world" was only posted now. No wonder I didn't understand it when I took the screenshot in the group yesterday_(:з∠)_ +1 for the fox demon who has been trying to gain a sense of presence Hurry up to the Dragon King Temple, I'm still waiting for the legendary small copy! Small copy!

The fox demon who has been trying to gain a sense of presence

The imagination of ancient people was also quite big.

I feel like the plot progress is a bit slow

Generally speaking, it is better to choose the most common name for Erlang Shen.

_(:з∠)_Continue to read popular science It seems that the Erlang Zhenjun here has a different setting? Can we wait until that day←_←

Is this article he? If I hadn't said it earlier and let me escape unscathed, I wouldn't be able to bear the pain anymore. QAQ (I think he is a family living happily together, you know~). Tell me if the ending is he. The author is a good person. It's rare to see a well-written article with high gold content. The suggestions below are my personal opinions, and I understand my inappropriate words... This is a novel, so this pacing issue... Also, author, don't you feel that your characters are submerged in the style of writing? The atmosphere of this article overshadows the characteristics of the characters, and the characters do not seem to have very distinctive characteristics... In short, it is weird, these people have similar temperaments... And that temperament is the feeling of this article, which makes people feel that you are writing a history book, not a novel, because you are only introducing grievances, rather than bringing the grievances of the characters to life. But this kind of blandness does have the feeling of ancient vernacular novels~ Of course, I watched it anxiously, and I feel there may be an error. If I say something wrong, please don't get beaten up and don't be disliked QAQ I like popular science articles the most. Although it is hard to read, is there any improvement?

Just a routine matter, come here to score