A Woman's Guide to Immortality

Has the author abandoned this project?

The way this discovery of the space and the process of cleansing the marrow should be written in reverse chronological order seems strange. Either add some plot points directly stating that she discovered it by accident, or insert a few sentences to make it a proper reverse chronological order. In any case, something is missing between being able to cultivate and describing the space.

The plot of the article is very jumpy.

That's incredibly disrespectful! Keep it up, moderator!

Well written, with a rich and varied train of thought.

It's very good. Rate it.

Rate it.

Just passing by, this is very well written, so I'm leaving a reply.

Well written, keep up the good work!

With a master, qualifications, time, treasures to conceal your abilities, and divine beasts, why insist on joining a sect, becoming a useless spiritual root, and seeking to be abused!