Marshal Wei Yuan (No Ancient Times)

To be honest, you really don't need to change your main plot based on their comments, because many people actually don't like to comment, and this work is labeled as a romance, but I saw the emotional scene at the end, which really made me uncomfortable. Since most people who choose to watch romance movies know that there are emotional dramas, then if they say they don't want to have emotions, then just watch the uncensored movies by yourself. If you insist on reasoning with such people, you can't explain it clearly. If you want to watch uncensored movies but come to the romance section, they are really looking for trouble.

There is no need to let readers' thoughts affect you. After all, this work is your own idea, and the relationship between the author and the reader is: you write, and he reads. If you can't stand it, just go away. Just learn from some opinions. If you care too much about what readers think, you will lose your original intention. The suppression of emotional scenes is a bit obvious... It feels like the male protagonist is just an emotionless robot... The male and female protagonists are pretty good, and the settings in all aspects are okay. However, the emotional scene in the finale was never there and I almost went crazy. Fortunately, they were together in the end. Don't do this next time... It's labeled as romance after all...

What a contradiction. In the previous article, when Su Yuning recalled her past life, she said that Wei Xiuyuan killed many people when he was in high rank in the army, including Commander Chen. Now in the past life, Su Yuning is dead, but Commander Chen is still alive.

I... I think it's okay, but the length is too limited, right? Forget it, congratulations to the newlyweds! !

I think it has a sense of cp! Doesn't it have to be a big fuss to be considered cp? I think the thoughts of the male and female protagonists are quite normal!

When I saw the last one together... It was really... Stiff to the point of me..._(:з)∠)_The author does not need to be influenced by readers. His own writing should follow his own ideas and follow the readers' wishes. It is really stiff.

I accept the male and female protagonists being together, and I don't dislike the female protagonist. After all, the author mentioned it at the beginning of the article, so I don't reject it either. But! This ending! This together! Isn't it a bit perfunctory? Ah? Let the hero have some adventure! Or maybe, author, you could add in the previous article that the male protagonist was attracted to the female protagonist at a certain moment, but suppressed it until he returned to the interstellar. However, the current situation is that the male protagonist really had no interest in the female protagonist before, emmmmm Then he suddenly said something about being together, perfunctorily

If I can return to the Federation in the future, I will have no CP. I feel that the heroine should have a strong mentality and give them practical help. I am grateful. When I can really go to the Federation and see another way of life for women, I think she will not be so persistent in wanting to marry the hero.

Finished??ヽ(°▽°)ノ?! The relationship between the male and female protagonists is indeed a bit 2333, but the plot is good!

The heroine's siblings used to have a very good relationship with the heroine. When they met the heroine again, they also felt alienated when they saw that the heroine was so young. That's why they spoke so harshly.