I was playing a full-dive online game when I transmigrated!
Luckily, a powerful game System is bound to my soul!
Reborn as a little orphan girl in a feudal society, I have to cultivate!
Cultivate, cultivate, cast off the false and preserve the true, cultivate what is real;
Follow the Dao, follow the Dao, don't cultivate the Heavenly Dao, cultivate my own Dao!
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Oops, dual cultivation is so embarrassing, but your writing is not ambiguous at all.
Confirm that this article has collapsed
Introducing the concept of a planet in the first place is a big failure. If there is a planetary universe, the laws of physics are also valid. The size of the planet itself and gravity cannot be self-consistent. The existence of so-called spiritual power cannot be truly explained. It would be easier to simply set the laws of physics in different planes. It is not the same world at all.
And how to calculate the ascension of a planet? Flying to another planet or another universe? How to calculate the immortal's speed? The existence of void in the universe is far infinite times larger than the size of the planet. According to the flying speed of Xiuzhenwen, it will not be able to reach another planet even if it flies to death. Rely on teleportation array? I can't explain how it was built at all
In short, it is extremely stupid to introduce modern concepts of the universe into fairy tales.
Also, since the so-called male protagonist was confirmed, the plot has completely collapsed. The protagonist is now upgraded too fast and too fiercely. All the previous characters and enemies are obsolete, so a new map has to be opened. Generally speaking, the higher the level of immortality writing, the more difficult it becomes to write, and all kinds of fighting that are close to the feelings of normal people are gone. Later, the determination of the system and the settings of the destructive power reference characters and forces were too far away from reality, making it increasingly difficult to write. Coupled with the random entry of the male protagonist, the future was very unpromising.
It's a pity that it might have become a good fairy tale, but because the author wanted a male protagonist, it not only broke the development of the original story, but also greatly accelerated the upgrade speed in order to match the strength of the male protagonist, so he had to forcefully open a new map. All the previous settings and characters were outdated. It can be said that the male protagonist was divided into two unrelated parts before and after he was confirmed, not to mention the inexplicable and blunt emotional drama.
Sure enough, the biggest scourge of female cultivators is the male protagonist
No matter what, the entire chapter is filled with a passerby intruding in. Where are you, the hero and heroine? Come on!
After watching Spreading Flowers~ This War Wind Palace should be here to give experience to the male and female protagonists. .
Why hasn't it been updated yet? I'm so anxious to wait~ I'm frustrated in the exam tonight and I need some comfort~~
Oh, the female lead's level has increased, and she can advance together with the male lead~ I'm so happy~ But what's going on? Looking forward to the follow-up~
Looking forward to Qin Shang's cultivation reaching a further level! ! ! Good chicken jelly~~
Sure enough, the heroine is completely tied to the hero, and all the secrets have been revealed, confirming that this article has officially entered the stage of destruction.
Why does the female Xiuwen like having a male protagonist so much?
And usually the male protagonist has all the qualities of an ideal partner, but he just doesn't look like a real person and has no human touch. In addition, after the male protagonist is determined, the story often suddenly changes from a single protagonist to a dual protagonist. The male protagonist has a lot of words to use to show off, and he has to come out to save the female protagonist several times, taking away half of the opportunities and benefits. In most cases, his cultivation level will always be higher than that of the female protagonist to show how good the male protagonist is.
All in all, as soon as the male protagonist is confirmed, the protagonist's sense of existence begins to decline. In addition to the male protagonist competing for the scene, the proportion of various jealousies and romance begins to increase. As the quality of the story plummets, it is not clear whether it is a fairy tale or a romance novel.
In fact, after thinking about it after finishing the full text, I can actually write the various upgrades of the protagonist without a male protagonist, and it can probably be written better.
So why does a male protagonist who usually seems fake and inhumane, who constantly steals scenes for every opportunity, reduces the protagonist's sense of strength and presence, and creates bloody and flattery scenes, so commonly appear in female cultivators' novels?
I can only think that female authors and female readers just like to have male protagonists, regardless of whether it looks fake or not, whether it is beneficial to the protagonist's vivid image or whether the story itself is good or not.
Male protagonist, as long as you are handsome, strong, passionate, and good at posing to look cool, everything else is unimportant.
Such a cute System~
Oops, dual cultivation is so embarrassing, but your writing is not ambiguous at all.
Confirm that this article has collapsed Introducing the concept of a planet in the first place is a big failure. If there is a planetary universe, the laws of physics are also valid. The size of the planet itself and gravity cannot be self-consistent. The existence of so-called spiritual power cannot be truly explained. It would be easier to simply set the laws of physics in different planes. It is not the same world at all. And how to calculate the ascension of a planet? Flying to another planet or another universe? How to calculate the immortal's speed? The existence of void in the universe is far infinite times larger than the size of the planet. According to the flying speed of Xiuzhenwen, it will not be able to reach another planet even if it flies to death. Rely on teleportation array? I can't explain how it was built at all In short, it is extremely stupid to introduce modern concepts of the universe into fairy tales. Also, since the so-called male protagonist was confirmed, the plot has completely collapsed. The protagonist is now upgraded too fast and too fiercely. All the previous characters and enemies are obsolete, so a new map has to be opened. Generally speaking, the higher the level of immortality writing, the more difficult it becomes to write, and all kinds of fighting that are close to the feelings of normal people are gone. Later, the determination of the system and the settings of the destructive power reference characters and forces were too far away from reality, making it increasingly difficult to write. Coupled with the random entry of the male protagonist, the future was very unpromising. It's a pity that it might have become a good fairy tale, but because the author wanted a male protagonist, it not only broke the development of the original story, but also greatly accelerated the upgrade speed in order to match the strength of the male protagonist, so he had to forcefully open a new map. All the previous settings and characters were outdated. It can be said that the male protagonist was divided into two unrelated parts before and after he was confirmed, not to mention the inexplicable and blunt emotional drama. Sure enough, the biggest scourge of female cultivators is the male protagonist
No matter what, the entire chapter is filled with a passerby intruding in. Where are you, the hero and heroine? Come on!
After watching Spreading Flowers~ This War Wind Palace should be here to give experience to the male and female protagonists. .
Why hasn't it been updated yet? I'm so anxious to wait~ I'm frustrated in the exam tonight and I need some comfort~~
Oh, the female lead's level has increased, and she can advance together with the male lead~ I'm so happy~ But what's going on? Looking forward to the follow-up~
Looking forward to Qin Shang's cultivation reaching a further level! ! ! Good chicken jelly~~
Sure enough, the heroine is completely tied to the hero, and all the secrets have been revealed, confirming that this article has officially entered the stage of destruction.
Why does the female Xiuwen like having a male protagonist so much? And usually the male protagonist has all the qualities of an ideal partner, but he just doesn't look like a real person and has no human touch. In addition, after the male protagonist is determined, the story often suddenly changes from a single protagonist to a dual protagonist. The male protagonist has a lot of words to use to show off, and he has to come out to save the female protagonist several times, taking away half of the opportunities and benefits. In most cases, his cultivation level will always be higher than that of the female protagonist to show how good the male protagonist is. All in all, as soon as the male protagonist is confirmed, the protagonist's sense of existence begins to decline. In addition to the male protagonist competing for the scene, the proportion of various jealousies and romance begins to increase. As the quality of the story plummets, it is not clear whether it is a fairy tale or a romance novel. In fact, after thinking about it after finishing the full text, I can actually write the various upgrades of the protagonist without a male protagonist, and it can probably be written better. So why does a male protagonist who usually seems fake and inhumane, who constantly steals scenes for every opportunity, reduces the protagonist's sense of strength and presence, and creates bloody and flattery scenes, so commonly appear in female cultivators' novels? I can only think that female authors and female readers just like to have male protagonists, regardless of whether it looks fake or not, whether it is beneficial to the protagonist's vivid image or whether the story itself is good or not. Male protagonist, as long as you are handsome, strong, passionate, and good at posing to look cool, everything else is unimportant.