Is It Strange for a Rose to Have No Thorns?

Although the writing is good, the plot is abrupt and the logic is confusing. So, the author is suitable for writing prose, not novels. Keep up the good work!

- -The back part is a bit baffling~~The explanation is too unclear~~The male protagonist's feelings also make people feel very vague~~

P~~The male protagonist is inexplicable~ There is no foreshadowing at all if he likes to be drunk~~ Even if it is love at first sight, it is not so hungry~ What to do with Qi Yuan~ I hate the male protagonist~

- -The jump is too big~~dizzy~~unclear~~~~the male protagonist is annoying~

Finally finished reading. . Tired. . . . . . .

The clouds are light and the wind is light, floating out of the dust, and I am about to become an immortal.

How many did An Ran end up with in the end? Two or three? Isn't there another one? Why did you disappear halfway? Why did you disappear?

The progress is too fast and I can't keep up.

Hungry and feeling good about writing. .

I agree, it's a pretty good article.