[Fake Tutor] She Saw Another Dimension

Hello, author, this is Uncle Yun, the power source of "Illegal Party | Changping Pu", please give me some advice~ This work is a short story of more than 10,000 words, but the storyline is very complete and the characterization is also very good. And it is indeed as the author said, it really cannot be regarded as a tutoring fanfic in any sense, because the tutoring characters that appear are all imagined by Hutao himself, so it is indeed a pseudo-tutoring fanfic. Personally, I actually have a soft spot for the heroine Hu Tao... It's hard to say. You can't say she did something wrong, nor can you say she was right. Because everything originated from her own imagination, it may be regarded as a parallel world, or it may be regarded as an illusion in her brain. The undeniable fact is that the final tragedy happened because of her. It's true that the penultimate chapter alone is a wonderful HE, but even so, I felt it was creepy. Because from an objective point of view, he suddenly appeared at Yamamoto's house, declared that he liked Yamamoto, and also told where Yamamoto had been recently... It felt a bit like STK. Although such a weird and unpredictable HE is indeed the best looking HE, it still feels a bit scary. As for Kurumi's feelings for Yamamoto, I personally feel that it is more about dependence than admiration. It's precisely because he saw Yamamoto during the long-term oppression, and because his family environment is similar to that of the Yamamoto family in another dimension, and he spent much more time seeing Yamamoto than others that he became like this, right? I personally feel that this kind of pathological dependence cannot be regarded as pure love, because from Walnut's point of view, Yamamoto is a person who has a very nice smile and will never express any malice towards himself. Even if this person can't see himself at all, Hu Tao's life is still very precious. ... Delusion is a disease and needs treatment. And if you look at the last chapter based on the premise that Hu Tao is suffering from paranoia, the whole article starts to become unbelievable. According to the neighbors, Hutao suddenly became taciturn, so does that mean that she saw the vision in those few days? So, are the characters of the two murderous uncles and aunts just a fantasy? Personally, I feel that it is not a cruel person to do something like noticing that a child at home is too quiet and making an appointment with a doctor to visit the home. At this time, the psychiatrist's words made me pay attention to something: he had long known that Hu Tao suffered from delusion, which meant that he had already seen Hu Tao. But in Hutao's world, there was no such thing as a conversation with the doctor. Even from her point of view, the doctor's visit to her home was just like a simple visit. So what I thought was that Hu Tao subconsciously noticed that all this might be just a fantasy, but the worsening of her paranoia made her yearn for another world and began to forget reality bit by bit. Of course, there was also Hutao who was afraid that he would not be able to see Yamamoto after being cured, so the concept of a visit from a psychiatrist was subconsciously blurred. But if you think about it this way, the role of uncle and aunt also becomes weird. If the uncle and aunt who attacked Hu Tao were Hu Tao's own delusions, and in reality they still loved their adopted daughter very much, then many of Hu Tao's abuses could be said to be delusions, but only the final fire incident could not be viewed this way. Whose uncle would barge in when his adopted daughter is naked and hold a bottle of wine? If you look at it from another perspective, everything about the uncle and aunt is true, but this contradicts what the neighbors said before. Hu Tao's fantasy gradually intensified, and he did not become completely immersed in it all of a sudden. In other words, Hutao should still be the same as before in the early stages of his illness. But the neighbor said that he used to be a well-behaved child, that is to say, he could at least talk to his neighbors and had a friendly attitude. Hu Tao is not an optimistic person. In just a few chapters, everyone can see that she treats things with a silent attitude. So what about being nice to your neighbors? Is it because of illness? Or is it because Hu Tao became ill that her family's attitude towards her began to change? And the extra expenses that my uncle mentioned were his excuses, or were they the expenses for Hu Tao's medical treatment? But in the final analysis, what Hu Tao saw was just an illusion. A different dimension is a different dimension after all. If you understand it as paranoia, many things can be better understood. As the author said, whether it is understood as the parallel world's parallel world or as paranoia, in any case, for Hutao, her own world has ended and has a happy ending. What she expected was to reach another dimension, and just in time, she died and reached the other end of the dimension in her illusion. Personally, I feel that she has reached her ideal land and there is no need to pay any more attention to her. But the fact is that she set fire to her family and herself. I think she is a sad character. Although I still don't understand why she has paranoia, in reality, her choice is at least salvation for her. From this point of view, I think her life should be complete. As for the other two people who don't know whether to say they are innocent, deserve to be deserved, or are guilty, I can only say that life and death are determined by heaven = = In this long review, I did not talk about the matter from a large-scale perspective such as the structure of the article, but from the point of view of the plot of the article that made me confused from a pure reader's perspective. In fact, it is mainly because I think the author's writing style is very tense and the story structure is perfect. It is really a lot of boastful words, so I finally used this method to convey my own feelings in this article. I feel like I can't help the author... Is there really no problem with pure reader flow? Ahem, anyway, I hope the author likes it →→, this is Uncle Yun, the power source of "Illegal Party | Long Review Shop", please receive your review in time.

Update quickly, the word count is too few

I guessed that this was the ending, Damn, I pressed my hand. Is it really a disaster for thousands of years? Those two were just in a coma, ah, what a tragedy...

There is a feeling that the heroine is living in a different world, and she is addicted to hallucinations without knowing it. However, since it is the second dimension, I still don't want it to be so dark. The author Jun's writing is very good. The story structure, psychological description, etc. Are very attractive, although it is too short~\\(≧▽≦)/~

The heroine's idea is very strange. No one knows her there, so how can she support herself? Maybe it's because modern people are more selfish.

… Do you want this!!! QAQ And... I really want to read the long version

I still watched it_(:3 _| )L

Waiting for the update ~ I think the article is well written!

Great writing!!!! The heroine is a bit miserable... But this setting is so suitable for my taste!!! Please come on, author! Looking forward to updates!

Come here silently to send flowers/_>\\ I'm so sad that it's an abuse article <_<