Damn, I would like to give you a suggestion. The way you write it makes people lose the desire to read it. Moreover, I thought it was a preface at first and planned to skip it directly, but later I realized it was the main text. And I took a quick look at the previous part and found it boring and nothing attractive to me. Personally, I think you can make some changes while you are just starting to write (the above only represents my personal opinion)
Damn, I would like to give you a suggestion. The way you write it makes people lose the desire to read it. Moreover, I thought it was a preface at first and planned to skip it directly, but later I realized it was the main text. And I took a quick look at the previous part and found it boring and nothing attractive to me. Personally, I think you can make some changes while you are just starting to write (the above only represents my personal opinion)