The Reborn Interstellar Heartthrob

I read the pirated copy a long time ago, and I recalled this book to catch up and read it again hahahahahahaha

It took me two days to buy the entire book and it was very well written.

I finished reading it in one go. In fact, I personally feel that some parts are not very good, but it is really enjoyable, hehehehehehe. Ahem, actually, I have read this book before, but it was a pirated version. Many years later, I saw it when I was browsing the pole column, and I pulled it out and read it again. I made up for it by the way. Forgive me for reading the pirated version QAQ. Ahem, back to the topic. In fact, I think it's enough to feel comfortable writing with a pole, but the emotional drama may be a little less so. However, everyone has their own shortcomings, which is unavoidable and normal. In fact, I was quite embarrassed when I saw a lot of fierce words in the comments. In fact, there is no need to scold the author if I don't like it. I am also a coder, so I understand it deeply. It is not easy for the pole, so everyone should be friendly to her, haha. Also, I would like to give some suggestions to Dianzhang, if Dianzhang can still notice my comment, haha. That is, first of all, I think the pole can actually have a deeper understanding of accessories. In fact, many characters' personalities are too superficial; The second thing is the handling of the plot. I don't know how to control the rhythm. However, it can be seen that it has improved a bit in "White Moonlight" haha, but I have to work harder (??ω??)?? The third thing is how to deal with the ending of the characters. In fact, I personally think Anya is quite cute in the first part, but the kidnapping in the second part is actually a bit tense, and her relationship with Lal is also a bit weird. I hope it can be improved╭(╯ε╰)╮ Fourth, the ending of Biandan is always very hasty. I hope that in the next article, Biandan will think about the ending carefully. I feel that the subsequent plot is too fast, and it is seriously inconsistent with the long-winded explanation of the previous chapter with only a little plot hahahahaha. Ahem, cough, cough, finally, just encourage the pole and keep working hard, hehehehe ps: When is the boss going to start a new story? How long has it been since Bai Yueguang was finished? Tell me, I've already cooked the leftovers (?_?) Finally, the pole loves you duck~(≧▽≦)/~ La la la, although the writing style of the pole is not very good in Dali, which I like, but I just can't let it go. From the leader to now, I have always loved the pole and hope that the pole will get better and better in the future, hmm!

I always feel like Lucky said that on purpose!

I like Morrie's character very much. If you don't love him, you have to reject him and don't leave others with ambiguity. Love is not about who loves each other more. I think Mori and the eldest brother come to a natural conclusion in the end (while watching, I kept thinking about when to say that they are not related by blood, because the eldest brother is too forbearing in love). I also like Mori's domineering side and the boss Fan is very fond of~

Ahhhhh, the girlfriend plot is a bit annoying, can't there be a third party?

In fact, I really hope that Anya and Lachi will be together. Although Anya did something wrong, she was punished. Apart from being blackened, other aspects are quite distressing. Lachi is also pretty good. As for Mori and his brother, they will also be very happy.

I began to think that Anya was the male protagonist, after all, he took the initiative to talk to her at the beginning and was always very gentle. After all, they have been together since childhood. What I don't understand is that Anya is too cruel to him and is still locked up just because he likes him, or maybe Anya and his brother are both aggressive. I don't really like it, but the plot is good

I feel that Anya's character is very vague. Anya shouldn't be like this. He also deserves a good ending.

At the risk of being beaten, I would like to say a few words. I liked this article very much at first, and I wanted to read it ten times a day. Later, it became tasteless and was a pity to discard. In the end, it was over 500,000 words long. I didn't even know what the whole article was about, not the career of the protagonist, nor the feelings of the protagonist. No, there is no inner heart of the protagonist. The eldest brother is the CP, his feelings, and the interaction with the protagonist. I have not seen any of these, or have no impression. Some insignificant people appear one after another, usually passers-by who have done something or other and worship the protagonist and then switch to The protagonist ends one chapter with one sentence, and then changes to a passerby in the next chapter. The image of the protagonist is too thin. After reading it, I have no impression at all. The protagonist is a statue enshrined on the stage called good-looking and powerful. He is nothing if people watch and praise him. Finally, An Ya's betrayal is the climax. As a child who has been together for more than ten years, the protagonist has no inner conflicts, pain and regrets. These are not even seen in the end. Anya, the child, is like a stone on the roadside. Because it hits the protagonist, he is kicked away by the protagonist, and that's it. I like sweet and greasy love stories. When I first started following it, I was looking forward to how the two people would show off their love and dazzle everyone. In the end, the relationship between the two was compressed into two chapters. From confession to oh so I like you too to falling in love to having sex and getting married, it was compressed in these two chapters. As for the career line without feelings, it was even less and compressed into a few hundred words. The author's writing is smooth and the style is comfortable to read, but the plot, I'm sorry I didn't see the plot. I have never written such a long comment. I hope I won't be scolded. After all, I once liked this article so much.