The Libertine

Forgive me for knowing that I am just finishing this article now, but it is only three chapters away from the last chapter I read_(:3∠)_The ending is a bit sudden, but I don't remember much of the previous plot. I don't feel like watching it again. It's strange how I persisted in watching blx in the first place. The first and middle parts are really stupid, but the long review at the bottom of the article is right. Some parts are vague and pass by. Obviously it can be more in-depth. The supporting characters are also very strange... Never mind, in short, congratulations on the completion. Come on for the new article╰(*′`*)╯

Although I skipped through it in the end... I finished it, not for the story, but for the author. I hope the author will not give up and continue to work hard and correct some problems. The next article will be better. Don't cry. It's so stupid and cute =3=

_(:з∠)_ I said it was well written.

EX Amway came to read this article. It is said that it is a good article that Ya accidentally discovered, but it is so cold that even a person who loves money as much as his life can't stand it and is shocked. I told EX that I didn't have any desire to click on this title... Until now, I've read the whole book, and I still don't know why the author chose this title, or does it have some other intention? Later, I hooked up with another gay friend, but the gay friend gave up after reading the copy, so it's not without reason that I'm cold... As the saying goes, those who are rich support a financial career, and those who have no money support a personal career. If you have no money, just make a long comment. The author has written more than 20,000 words so seriously, but there is not even a long review, which is really sad. I feel that no matter how unrighteous the Three Views are or how many flaws there are in the article, the author still needs to be praised for his seriousness in writing the article without adding water or cheating. You may not like to comment (I don't like it either), you may say that the writing is not good enough, but don't vent to the author. The author's sincerity can't wait to come out through the lines (what the hell), I think we can still sit down and communicate calmly (and the author is so hot and cute). Generally speaking, the writing style is very good, and the plot is also very good. The author has the courage to write this story that will make you fall in love at the first sight. It is really courageous. But in my opinion, there are a lot of things that may not have been well thought out, which ultimately results in this not being what I would call a great article. First of all, I think the biggest failure may be that the author did not understand the logical relationship of the story very smoothly, which caused readers to be confused. At first, readers thought it was a story about Zha Shou returning to China and discovering that he has been silently loved by the infatuated actor for many years. Director Lu's various pamperings by the actor led to the first impression of Zha Shou being confirmed. Slowly, he discovered that everyone around the actor had their own concerns, and then discovered that it was a game directed and acted by the actor. According to the development of this plot, especially the car crash scene, it is impossible to HE in any case. Director Lu, a smart and lazy person, cannot fall into the same pit twice. But I feel that the author really wanted to tell this story, so it was logical that Director Lu got cancer. In fact, I don't think this turn of events is very abrupt. Seeing that Director Lu was so lazy and had irregular meals, he must not be in good health, but why is it liver cancer and not stomach cancer... The actor was probably fooled, and he was determined to change his face and start a new life. After finally learning that Director Lu had cancer, it was logical that he would be HE. In my opinion, if you write according to the originally designed story, you only need to make the game story more vivid and specific, and then after everyone gets into the game, it will be pretty good. But the author is too soft-hearted and insists on HE, and there is not enough foreshadowing and foreshadowing in the front, so I feel that there is a huge difference in style before and after, and I am even reading two articles. The first half has always left me feeling stuck in my throat. The actor and Director Lu are very affectionate, but they are not true love for each other. Everyone around them seems to have stories, and it seems that everyone knows it. Only Director Lu and the readers are kept in the dark. This feeling is very unpleasant for readers, and to be honest, I didn't understand the plot of "One Ounce of Moonlight" interspersed in the middle. It felt like a vague allusion to the actor, but in the end, I saw that he was just a person who dedicated himself to art. Apart from the fact that he could draw, he didn't look like the actor. The plot of "One Ounce of Moonlight" felt useless. It didn't need to be written with so much effort. Moreover, there were so many chapters that I skipped directly in the end... The other one is the characters. The only one who feels normal from beginning to end is Director Lu. He is lazy, talented, decisive, too soft-hearted, and dares to love and hate. It's probably just such an image. In fact, what he does is quite like a virgin, but the author writes it very well and still completely creates this character image. In comparison, the movie king is very messed up and not a normal psychopath. At the beginning, the author may have wanted to give Director Lu a very shocking feeling, so there are a lot of diseases piled up. I was thinking, if there is such a person with such a disease, it will be very difficult to live, let alone act. I think it should be written in a more normal way, with only some main symptoms. For example, it is just an emotional disorder, and psychosis is just a way for him to avoid the emotional disorder and become someone else to get along and communicate with other people. The female partner is a person who I think is very broken. Although she is a psychiatrist, the psychiatrist should be the most rational person and the most indifferent to the patient's emotions. However, in the article, the best actor is everything to the female partner. How can psychological treatment be carried out with such a bonded relationship? When the female supporting actor finally said that she couldn't reconcile with Lou Yan because she was everything to the actor, it was actually a bit interesting. It could be a good way to dig into the past of the two people and figure out the origin of the actor's illness. But unfortunately, the female supporting actor's role ended here. Such an important supporting female character never appears at all later... To be honest, I think that in terms of the plot after Director Lu's appearance, the supporting female character is not of great significance. Moreover, I act like I am the only one in the world standing closest to the Best Actor, so it is easy to attract evil. Except for the female supporting characters, there are many characters, but none of them have a well-arranged beginning. They often appear inexplicably and then disappear inexplicably. Jian Cong is like this, inserting forcefully, and there is no news after the car accident. Teacher Qin also appears like this without any precautions or worries... Which makes the readers a little confused. Another problem is that the relationship between the characters is too complicated. Director Lu and the actor are not the kind of people who like to turn the circle of friends around them into one circle of friends, but their friends are all inextricably linked to each other, and the communication is too close. The relationship between Director Lu and the actor came and went very quickly in the beginning. Not many people should know about it. How come everyone around him has become good friends one after another? Especially since the actor and Lu Xudong are not from the same world, I don't know how they became good friends. The last one is the issue of love line. I believe this is also where many people are confused. Whether there is love between these two people will probably not be understood until the last moment. Director Lu was relatively easy to talk to, but he forgave too quickly in the end. When he got sick, he felt that he should cherish the moment, and he easily forgave the actor without any abuse. The actor's side is much more complicated. In the beginning, he only fell in love with Director Lu because of the supporting actress. He hated him and wanted to be the Lou Yan that everyone liked. He entangled the pilot and had a relationship, and then it ended quickly, so it turned into true love? It's really a bit puzzling. Later on, we did see signs of love in the process of getting along, but every time the actor denied it with very heartless words, and the author kept creating an illusion that the actor's acting skills were so good that you mortals couldn't see it, so the readers didn't know whether those details of love were real or staged. In fact, there was no clear explanation of what the game was in the end. The actor has always given people the impression that he has too good control over the game and does not get stuck at all, so the scene where the actor goes crazy later is particularly unconvincing. If you really loved him, even if you didn't know it, you wouldn't do anything like driving him to death or slandering him in public, right? I can't understand these two points, especially when he realized his love for Director Lu and said that to him in public. Even if he didn't know about Director Lu's illness, I couldn't figure out why he did this. The readers' portrayal of the actor as a psychopath was so successful that I think all his actions cannot be explained by normal people's thinking. However, readers are all normal people, so they will feel that the actor's outlook is too incorrect, his brain is too sick, and it is too strange. I really can't blame the readers for this. I personally feel that if the author draws a circle that is too big for him to control, the readers will easily become confused. The actor feels a little like this, and he will be punished for being too pretentious. Overall, this is a sincere article. I salute the author for his perseverance. I hope he can stick to his own ideas in the future and continue to try whether it is cold themes or perverted attacks! It's already the end of September, where's the new article I promised…

It's a great article. I read it for two days in a row. I was very moved. Fortunately, Lu Haiyang was with Li Qingzhou. Fortunately, he didn't give up. I hope they will always be happy

The writing style is really great. Although the narrative logic is a bit difficult to understand, the flaws are not concealed. Reading the whole article, I feel that the brushwork is very smooth and has a soft feeling. Looking forward to the new work ~ BTW, I really don't want to read the story between Lou Shi and Chu Xinxue. . . Really, Chu Xinxue is really annoyed. . . (′_＀.)

When I was looking at the collection, I found that I had purchased the finished product for half price. Order one and support it, okay?

Ah, it's over. Ps, after reading the introduction, I feel that the new article will be very cute^O^

The script feels a bit like The Moon and Sixpence

I like the big article very much. It feels very gentle. I rarely feel this comfortable feeling in articles. I feel very lucky to read this article.