Hunter Fanfiction: The God Beyond the Circle

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No matter it is you, Artisu, or Jin Xuan, there has been no news on JJ since May 11. Not only has there been no update, but there has not even been a reply from the author, which makes me a little worried. . . Especially you Yaoqian, who promised to update this place around Mother's Day. . . . With such a big thing happening, I really don't want anyone to get into trouble again, so please come up and take a dip! Author's reply: Ah... Thank you, you have greatly comforted my fragile little heart... By the way, I just updated the fake time travel... So please don't worry about my life safety... Even if I die... Then it must be because of overwork...

This guy Yao Qian is really a top chatterbox who is not inferior to Midori. In other words, green is better than blue. Since this little girl named Lu is a child of the Yaoqian family, she is still immersed in her mother's day and night teachings and has her mother's demeanor. Ahem, I'm here to shoot bricks. Generally speaking, for an article with such an interesting setting, such a gorgeous style, and such a cold connotation, I should seriously offer flowers and fruits, entertain the bride with colorful clothes, and promote it in a big way. However, if you look at the update date, you will know that the author cannot be full of ideas and passion without making a splash. The essence of Yaoqian is an m. Wen is like a car. You think it is running fast, but in fact it takes into account the traffic rules and has more than 30% remaining power. If you want to see even the last bit of reservation, you might as well put it on the racing track to compete with Ferrari. In the same way, we first need to take a look at the world carefully crafted by Yao Qian-san. It is better to be picky and directly compare it with Master Togashi. Closer to home, please watch the Olympic showdown between Togashi-san and Yaosen-san with the mentality of friendship first and competition second. (After Amber's insinuation, classmate Yao Qian started talking, and Amber came to report for everyone) What kind of realm has the hunter's world progressed to, and what kind of realm do most fans stay at? In fact, there is a difference between the two realms. As you can see, fandom is basically a backdoor, showing the style of our generation with inherent settings. The question is, what is the borrowed shell like? Here I have to talk about the shells of most people - they look so similar - so much so that when I first saw this article by Yao Qian, I actually let it go. Yao Qian's writing was really vulgar at first. . . . . . Not only is it vulgar, but it's also not to my liking – I don't like divine wear. Hui Changhui often doesn't like the story of divine intervention. Basically, just like the past generations of the moon, God's darling slowly turned into God's toy with the evolution of the authors, but the feeling of the theme did not change much. It can be said that the power of the master slowly changed to describe the power of the resister. Here I refer to God as an inherent rule. The former follow the rules and promote them, while the latter resist the rules and create their own rules. This is not very clear. It should be said that the rules that were originally intended to be stated are expressed in a concealed and repressive way. The high-end cliché I am referring to is the sense of "I am innocent and everything is indebted to me" hidden in the text. This point is the same whether it is explained from Natsu Qian's point of view or from Midori's point of view. The surface irony, self-deprecation and dark humor of the text are completely opposite, but the underlying intention is conveyed like this. Pity and helplessness—this is the most indispensable trait among hunter fandoms. In other words, the original intention of Yao Qianwen is probably to describe a redemption. Togashi's world rarely depicts themes of pity and helplessness. Togashi's world is more about positive and realistic judgment and choice. Although when writing fan fiction, we all forget the real protagonist. But the protagonist still exists clearly, influencing most people's writing ideas - constructing a character similar to or opposite to it. I don't want to talk about Xiaojie, I just want to talk about the words "bottom line justice" written on Yao Qian's copywriting. In fact, Togashi has no justice at all. From the hunter exam to beating up the enemy Hakka, and then from the Sky Arena to the Youxin Auction, Togashi has always insisted on building a world without absolute justice. The so-called personal justice probably means standing on the side of those who are close to you. Every choice and judgment has this result. In Togashi's world, morality has neither an upper limit nor a bottom line. (The one person who I think is a slight exception is when Xiaodi knocked over Nobunaga with a vacuum cleaner.) Midori's sense of morality, or the tendency to justice, is unexpectedly strong among Yousen's characters. Xia Qian also has some hidden justice. The difference between Yaoqian and Togashi is that she has that kind of moral tendency subconsciously. Although the text is trying to be vague on the surface, it wants to create a situation where "everyone has his own difficulties and three views" and is considerate and tolerant. But when put into context, these are too superficial. It's like the breeze blowing on the skin, it can't cut through the surface layer and has no real effect. Yao Qian's intention can be said to be a bit confusing at this point, but it ultimately failed. Let's talk about characterization again. There is no need to talk about Togashi. Yao Qian once said that he wanted to get rid of being the same as everyone else. In fact, this has been done very well, almost flawlessly. The only drawback is that "poor" feeling I mentioned above. No matter which character he writes about. After laying out the already gorgeous character, using redundant writing to describe the pitiful character already made me feel that it destroyed the original shaping of the character. "This is a very xxxxxx person, but he is very pitiful." "This is a very xxxxxxxx person, but she is very pitiful." And "This is a very xxxxxxxxxxx person, but why is he so pitiful?" These feelings are very distinct in the main characters. Therefore, I prefer those characters that can be described in one sentence, such as Mandela, such as criticism. Sometimes the so-called full character is actually a clear enemy. Many people are similar in nature. The essence is similar but there are differences in expressive power, and how to express these differences requires urgent skills. When the skill is not enough to reach this state, a comprehensive and full personality is not as loving as those "characteristics as sharp as hooks". So if I talk about the flaws in characterization, this is the main aspect I want to talk about. Let's talk about the layout of the plot. I prefer this kind of gradual revelation story. It can be said that Yaoqian has a very good grasp of the progress. Just like Russian dolls, one inside the other, each one is complete and stylish, inviting people to keep exploring. The advancement of this plot is carried out through the transformation of the characters' perspectives. Generally speaking, there is a flaw in the character's perspective change, which is the orderliness. Because Yao Qian's writing has just changed its perspective, I can't casually evaluate whether it is a success or a failure. But apart from what I talked about with Yao Qian, I still have a sense of chaos about that world. The article should leave a certain amount of room for thinking and organization, but some readers are in a hurry to set the structure. Just like I actually pay more attention to the plot. If I didn't write a review, I wouldn't study how the world turns. I don't know what to do in this place, so I just remind you: Yaoqian, people are a little tired of watching it. Finally, as I said at the beginning, I have become accustomed to Yaoqian's gorgeous writing style, and I have also become accustomed to the very cute setting. I like this article very much. So like the Queen said: The so-called talented author is someone who writes well and can finish it. Regarding this, the best way to express yourself is actually not to compare you with the great master Togashi like I did. Instead, you put your story into writing in its entirety. This is more of a pursuit than others appreciating your writing or criticizing your writing. The last thing I want to say is: don't cheat. End of report, advertising time: Thank you to all the loving authors and readers for watching "Gods Outside the Circle". Please continue to tune in next time. Author's reply: I asked for a long brick at the time, but Mr. Amber still gave me a flower review based on the Thai charity... I was really moved by this demon... Well... That's it... (Comes with narration; why are you so weak? Ben Yao: God's long review... It's too exciting...)

What I want to know more is Xiao Yi's love history == Author's reply: …Okay, come to me and I will dictate it to you.

Personally, I actually prefer Xia Qian, but it's a pity that your mother doesn't love you! I had to let my aunt do it for me! Speaking of old demon, when are you going to give your child some maternal love... The aunt who felt sorry for Xia Qian was busy sharpening her knife... Author's reply: (Raises left hand) I swear, if I have the urge and courage to update, I will update this place and update Xia Qiantong as soon as possible.

Pack and go. Thanks! ^^

Has this pit been abandoned? Let's spread some dirt...

Xia Qian, after all this time, only Aunt Jinxuan still remembers you! Your HM said she abandoned you! Come here, into the warm embrace of auntie, I will give you comfort!! The author's reply: OTZ… I was wrong... I didn't expect that someone would remember him even though he was so neglected... Okay... I know... I'll write... I'll complete it... In other words, I'd like to introduce a super funny thing to compensate for your fragile heart. "[Hunter Fan (Ultimate Mission)]" This Dongdong is really powerful, and now he is like an idol of my new generation...