This is a story about a girl who is innocent but not so innocent, clever but not so clever, and a sinister, ambitious, domineering man whose only desire is to treat her well and give her happiness. It's about a girl who likes to play dumb as she pursues an ambitious man. It's a story of going from misery to happiness. In short, this is her story.
Looks good, don't be too tired
The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work.
Honey that's awesome!
It's my first time to write so well.
I haven't finished it yet, I'll read it next time