Everything before my eyes gradually blurred. Through the haze, bamboo leaves drifted down...
I couldn’t help remembering what Master once said:
...A drifting life is destined to drift forever...
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It's a bit inconsistent, and I feel like some details are missing in some places.
"I didn't ask for midnight snacks, Er Shua, Xu'er, you know I never eat late night snacks." What does "er Shua" mean?
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"Get up quickly, Miss Piao Ling. Just call me "Feng" from now on. Don't ever call me "Benefactor" again."
Change typo
"Get up quickly, Miss Piao Ling. Just call me "Feng" from now on. Don't ever call me "Benefactor" again."
This ending. . . . . . . . . . . . . . Piao Ling... It's such a pity to die. . . . . . . . . . . . .
What can I say? ? ? ? ? Khan~~~~~~``. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
The plot is a bit too simple. . . . . . . . . .
I came across your article by chance~ It's so fateful~!
Why does it look like the "three-paragraph composition" the teacher said?
But it's okay~ I will keep following the article~ Come on~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, I agree with the one downstairs, it's too short, but since it's your first time posting, I'll give you some points and try to write a better one~ Haha
I'll leave you a message wo kan guo le
It's a bit inconsistent, and I feel like some details are missing in some places.
"I didn't ask for midnight snacks, Er Shua, Xu'er, you know I never eat late night snacks." What does "er Shua" mean?
Change typo "Get up quickly, Miss Piao Ling. Just call me "Feng" from now on. Don't ever call me "Benefactor" again."
Change typo "Get up quickly, Miss Piao Ling. Just call me "Feng" from now on. Don't ever call me "Benefactor" again."
This ending. . . . . . . . . . . . . . Piao Ling... It's such a pity to die. . . . . . . . . . . . .
What can I say? ? ? ? ? Khan~~~~~~``. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . The plot is a bit too simple. . . . . . . . . .
I came across your article by chance~ It's so fateful~!
Why does it look like the "three-paragraph composition" the teacher said? But it's okay~ I will keep following the article~ Come on~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, I agree with the one downstairs, it's too short, but since it's your first time posting, I'll give you some points and try to write a better one~ Haha