Shen Chen'ai's Life in an Ancient World

... What a big hall, with 200 tables!

Pumpkin's writing is very creative, and the beginning is good, but there is a lack of desire in the middle that makes people eager to read. There is a feeling that when you feel that you are about to reach a climax, it feels inexplicably flat and not high enough. In fact, I think your writing should be mainly about entrepreneurship, supplemented by emotions. Just like in this article, Luo Ding's career should be drawn out with its twists and turns. When it achieves a stage of success, it should include the reactions of third parties such as partners, employees, consumers, and passers-by, so that readers can feel that I am the third party and rejoice and envy the protagonist's success. This is the case in "Niu Men". When the protagonist succeeds, he should also have a sense of social responsibility and benefit the people around him. This benefit should be expressed by writing a short story about the changes in the life of a third party. My humble opinion, I look forward to more and better stories from you!

Congratulations on the completion~Thank you for your hard work~It's not a bad ending! The New Year's song at the end was such a "knowing hit" that I couldn't help but feel soft... I hope the protagonists will always be happy! ↖(^ω^)↗The sentry guide Leng Weapon poked me a little bit cute again! ! ! Looking forward to it!

Congratulations on the completion~~~Oh... I have finished another good book

Congratulations on the completion of Da Wenwen! ! ! ! ~\\(≧▽≦)/~Come on! ! ! !

It's not a bad ending, it's well finished! Congratulations~ It's a complete success

I found out that Luo Da's father is just a soy sauce guy. When he first came out, I thought he had a big move.

The ending is full of flowers, very satisfying

Finished spreading flowers ~ keep up the new article↖(^ω^)↗

Congratulations on the new article.