Quick Transmigration: Lost in a Book and Just Passing Through

Well. . I can't understand the plot or characters.

To add confusion to the author as a science general: "The past is unchangeable" and "the future can be changed"; then, compared to us in the future, we are in the past time period, so if we do something we regret now, and we in the future return to the present and want to change the future, then can we change it~

The second one has been figured out!

The love of living and dying together is very touching, but love is not everything in life.

The master who bets on the unreliability of a spicy stick is the author himself! ! ! ! !

I forgot to point out the foreshadowing I laid before and won't write it down again later. I'm afraid I'll forget it later so I'll record it here. Original text of "The Mighty Peach Blossom": The peach blossoms turned black not only because Zhong Er hurt her, but because her promise of blooming flowers in three years was broken by Zhong Er, Lu Yisi became furious and vomited blood and died. Yes, generally speaking Lu Yisi is the cannon fodder or supporting role in the original text. Tao Yao once heard Lu Yisi say that he might die when the peach blossoms fall. He wasn't joking, he was just looking for an excuse because he felt he couldn't stand it. As a result, the peach blossoms had not fallen for two years. Lu Yisi thought that it was Liu Qianqian who had attached himself to the peach tree after his death. This absurd idea was the only pillar of his survival. (If you think his idea is weird, please forgive me.) I don't know what the meaning of writing this is, but it's just like this when this story comes to mind.

A cold review may lead to a movie star Hello, this is Lao Ba's comment on the article from Pu Miao Review Shop. Lao Ba doesn't read much about supernatural beings. His favorite writing style, cuteness and thunderous points are also being developed. He may have a venomous tongue, but please don't mind the author. Let's start with the title of the novel. The title is a bit literary and convoluted. If it's not eye-catching, how can it attract little angels to click in? In addition, please author, please quickly make a book cover and beautify your copywriting. Lao Ba really couldn't see clearly, and he couldn't tell the general content of the story through the copy. There is no book cover and the copy is too convoluted. How could a little angel click on the first chapter? In terms of title and content, supernatural seems to be a bit cold. Jinjiang is a website that mainly focuses on women's literature. It seems that only a small number of girls and little angels can read supernatural literature! Let's talk about the innocence of the soul. Cute girls probably don't have any special feelings about ghosts and ghosts. Besides, girls are afraid of ghosts, so why would they read ghost stories? Moreover, this rhythm is really unpleasant. Generally speaking, the first three chapters can determine whether the article will be read or not, but the author actually only brought out the male and female protagonists in the seventh chapter. And the first six chapters are just telling the story of the first unit? Lao Ba understands that the author also hopes to lay out a clue at the beginning and leave a suspense for readers to follow. However, the writing is so confusing and convoluted, will the little angels understand it? Most people who don't understand can just press the cross. Come on, it's time to comment on the writing style. I still want to praise the author's writing style. The author's writing style is good, and he also writes in an ancient style. Especially in the description of the environment, Lao Ba really likes the author's detailed description. People can be integrated into the situation of the story just by relying on the words; and the girl's wording is also ancient, so I also need to give it a thumbs up. But sometimes the author's paragraphs are scattered, and sometimes they only start and end in one sentence or two. Sometimes I get a headache when I read it! After reading the author's article, I felt like I was reading Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio. But the only difference is that Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio are different short stories; the author's article has two main characters connected in different units. However, for this type of article, it seems that articles submitted to magazines are better. It's a tragedy to see the author's click rate, but it cannot be regarded as a problem with the author's writing style. Lao Ba really feels a bit pity. If you use the author's writing style, as long as you choose the right subject, you may be able to write a very popular article. But, the author doesn't have to worry. Lengwen may be able to make a big splash one day, and the plot of the story seems to be incomplete (I mean the story line between the male and female protagonists). As long as you write it well and slowly, it will gradually get better. Author, please work harder~ Meow

Wow, the writing is great ( ⊙ o ⊙ ) I love the ancient style~ But I don't really like the ellipsis, please change it~↖(^ω^)↗Come on

Please update it soon, it's very well written.