As myths of all kinds swirl around us, who is the blue sky, who the white clouds, who the rosy clouds, and who the gods of the Nine Heavens?
When the white clouds and rosy clouds find the blue sky, all the sealed-away stories of the past will come to light one by one. But can the white clouds soar up to the blue sky? Can the rosy clouds spread across it?
Gods: undying legends. Compassion: the two points that balance the Book of Changes.
What, exactly, is a god? Does a god belong to a past life or to the future?
And what is a demon? Blood demons, demons of vengeance, demons of the heart: who is truly worthy of being called the primordial demon who stands alongside the gods?
All these questions, both illusory and real, will be answered in Donghuang Guhuang, a lost continent east of Zhongzhou and beyond the Eastern Sea.
The first installment of the “Shattered” series, “Shattered Souls in the Clouds,” tells the story of how, a century ago, Lanlin was razed by heavenly fire summoned at the Ling Empire’s behest. Sang Liujun, the sole surviving guardian of Lanlin, seeks revenge by any means necessary, leading Xingdie on a trail of murder and robbery. But when he discovers that it was all just a laughable, crumbling dream of revenge, and that the people of Lanlin have been using the great fire for their own ends, what will he choose? What awaits a man with no future: death? Being reborn? Utter despair? ...
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I'll scatter flowers for you again. I would like to make a suggestion, not about the article. You should make a chapter shorter, so that the click rate will be higher and it will be easier to read.
There are already two of them, and I still need others to comment on them. Do you know? Even now, everyone is only one meter tall.
This part of Hun Yun went through several twists and turns before settling down in Jinjiang. Now that it has been uploaded, the author himself should come out and say a few words. First of all, I would like to at least thank the few people who have read my work. I am really grateful and have no words to express. Thank you again for the comments and opinions of several readers, the long comments of snow netizens, etc. No more comments for now, just chatting about opinions. The first netizen's opinion is that the chapters of the work are too long and tiring to read. Got it, there should be some changes in the second Blood Eagle. The second netizen's long comment said, "Although the author has his own thoughts, if the forward and main text are connected well, it will be easy to get disconnected. It will make the readers feel uneasy." It is indeed a good opinion. In fact, Bufan revealed that the connection between the blood of the forward and the article is really not obvious. The second Blood Eagle said a little bit. The Gaiden Divine Chronicles is intended to be the myth of the Nine Heavens. There is a little connection, but the story does not reach the final ending, and the origin of the real myth will not be very correct. Netizen: What Shangguan Jinfeng said makes sense, the plot is scattered and there is no key point. The character dialogue and other details are not detailed enough. Thank you very much for this great opinion. This problem has really bothered me for a long time. Several of my sisters used to scold me so harshly. Hehe, it's really hard to be delicate, but as long as you try to change step by step, beauty will still appear. I hope to break through layer by layer, and I also want to break through with all my strength. Let me also talk about the thoughts before writing Hun Yun - the introduction, which leads to the historical prospect of the rebirth of the ancient gods and demons, and the hidden pen of the real mystery of the burning of the blue forest. Naturally, this work can only be used as an introduction to the characters and maps. The connection of the story will be disconnected from the second part, but it is indispensable, because if I don't write this, I don't know how many parts to write. In fact, writing Hun Yun may be my failure. The story has no real development route, and some character relationships are also mentioned here and there. Although they always use Sang Liujun to fight back and forth to find a way out, the real story is that if you knock down the Waterfall Stand, the story in Yuling will appear, and if you knock down Sword Pavilion, the mysterious disappearance of the Sword Master and the Sea Tribe woman will appear. Naturally, in some places, I didn't want to lay too much foreshadowing, and sometimes I wanted to tell it in the way of writing a historical story. However, in the end I found that this was not possible. After all, it was not a master's work. Many writing rules should be introduced step by step, one line at a time. Foreshadowing, setting off, foreshadowing is still foreshadowing, clear foreshadowing. Hidden ambush, long-term, short-term, etc. Are indispensable... But how can we go on? How long is this story? Let me explain - there are no less than four parts in the text, and the arrival of people from Middle-earth may also appear! The previous idea was that they were from Yue. (Okay, don't say anything, maybe it will change in the future! That wouldn't be good.) There is also a story waiting to be released about the ancient Jade Blue Demon and Su Xin. There are initially two side stories planned, which will not be very long: one is the myth of the Nine Heavens, and the other is the story of Feng Bo Pavilion. OK It's almost over Those who are willing to join me in uncovering the myth of the ancient leech, please wait! No matter what, if you have a plan, you have to finish it. Besides, it's only over one million words, so it's not difficult. Of course, if you don't like the style of Soul Cloud, you can also watch the next Blood Eagle, which will be another story. In fact, according to my conception, each part can be read separately, and a little more clarification will be added to the narrative. However, Gu Li's territory has not yet been released, and friends are still constructing it. The article didn't fully explain it, but it roughly refers to the waterfalls and mountains in the east, the two castles in the south - Youcheng and St. Laurent, and the high cliffs in the south. With Star Butterfly being betrayed by Kao, everything in the Valley of Flowers can be turned into smoke. The green city and green lake in the middle, the cloud eagle in the far north, the lost blue forest in the west, the blood sea in the west, and the sea tribe in the blood sea. There are several major landmarks - the waterfall shelf, the waterfall, Yuling Mountain, the green lake, the black volcano, the forest beside the swamp, the whirlpool of the blood sea, the empty mountain... Stories will happen in these places, and like you, I am waiting for them to reveal their beautiful faces. Thanks…
The fantasy is rich, but the plot is a bit scattered, and the details are not very compact, including the dialogue between the characters. Secondly, the suspense and foreshadowing make it easy for people to see the story behind it, so there is no so-called aftermath!
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Well, not too short, not too long. In the forward one, there is no big connection until the final ending that is already doomed. Wait, I can't answer more, and I can't answer more. The author is also a walking person, and I don't know how to come up with many plots^_^
Is the work very long? Why is there little connection between the forward and the first film? I hope Han Da can give me some reply——
Well, the background of the novel is very fantasy, and the beginning is also different. Compared with other novels, the chapters seem to be denser and have larger jumps. If I read other novels, I can get an idea of the general content by just skimming them. It's hard to skip this one by Han Da. I'll take a closer look at it tomorrow
I think your writing is really good! I have a lot of imagination! Come on!!