The Goddess's Personal Alchemist

It ended very quickly hh

The novel is still well written, but the ending is too sloppy and perfunctory. There are also several blocked articles.

Nice. Hope there is a part 2

I watched the ending first, and it felt like it wasn't finished yet.

I have just finished reading the article now. Lily fantasy is rare, and it is even rarer to be well written. The fighting scenes you described are very beautiful. The only flaw is that the whole article feels rushed, especially at the end, and part of the content is dry. I got into the trap from Li Qingzhao's article. I was very courageous at that time when I wanted to sit still. Even talented women in ancient times dared to have sex. The results looked pretty good. Both articles are very good. I hope you can work hard and produce more good works.

Supplementary points, good article~ I got into the author's trap from Li Qingzhao's article. Thanks to the author's article for letting me spend a good time.

Sprinkle flowers~ It's over like this… …

Flower~ Oh, it's a pity it's the last. . .

The author should have wanted to create an ending where life continues... But the big foreshadowing of the betrayer didn't come out. It really makes me jealous. Besides, Qinglang should have had a relationship with the goddess before... The staff, the tree of life, the green mysterious energy, etc. It feels like there are so many foreshadowings that have not been mentioned. I feel bad.

But it's still pretty