[Crossover] Aihara Kotoko's Second Life

The author has greatly created a calm and steady standard academic Kotoko in the article, which is very suitable to my taste, so even if I have not read the original work, I am attracted by this setting. But after reading it, I felt like, "Such a good setting was wasted." The description in the article is a bit thin, and I didn't feel the real charm of Kotoko. The whole story is just as smooth and soft as water (which is also good, but you have to consider whether it is too cumbersome). The plot is weak and unoriginal, and there is no shining point that can conquer me, including the male protagonist. I thought about it, and probably the most accurate description is, "not gorgeous enough." "Perfection among excellence" is all of Naoki's characteristics, but we all know that perfection alone is not enough. The author probably also wants to create a person who is "perfect among imperfections." Unfortunately, no matter from the Rikkai novel, the ghost story, or the university chapter, I have not seen the Naoki who is separated from the "perfection" itself. But during the forced kiss scene, I deeply felt that there was a force that finally stood out, as if it was a pool of clear water, violently injecting bright colors. The feeling was very charming. However, everything calmed down after that. I know that the fanfic is different from the original work, but I keep comparing the protagonist and the plot. The setting of the work really won my heart. It can be said that the starting point is much higher. But after reading "Love with a Kiss", I didn't feel the full, warm and happy feeling in my chest after reading "Love with a Kiss". It should be said that it was much weakened and not that profound. This is my intuitive feeling after reading the article. I hope it can be of some help. I hope your writing will get better and better.

Uncle Eat... Am I the only one who thinks wrong...

Very beautiful, Xiao Tianwen [Three Flower Cat Head]

I particularly like the author's articles. I hope there are good fans who can recommend them.

That returnee typed 233 wrongly

Nice! ! Finished with flowers~

Ouch! ! Fried chicken praise! ! The plot is great! It's rare to find an article about mischievous kisses. I really want to read more! ! ! What do you think, author?

I have only watched the Taiwan version. And I have no interest in Japanese dramas. . . . So, I have to say, look at the Japanese names throughout the article. I'm in pain.

Write more extras, it's totally not enough~~

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