The Apprentice Creator

I finally finished reading this book after many years... I can only say that it is baffling.

I've been reading Suda's novels since I was a child. Ghost Hotel is quite impressive, but this thing really has a rush that makes me really fucked up. The previous chapters were handled very well, but the last game. I have a very bad feeling. What on earth is Sal doing? I also want to ask. The ending was very rushed and felt like it was unfinished. From the time Sal used a little trick to hide the god and turned into an evil spirit to the time they reconciled, there was a weird feeling. What on earth was he doing? Let them confront each other as warriors, then give up the opposition and surrender, spread the skills, and make □ become a unified person. It looks good, yes, very perfect. But why did Sal do this? Jealousy? Or is it better to set up a situation to develop the country? If it is just to cause conflict and lead to development, the previous state of the Kingdom of Gods, Gods, Gods and Earth was very prone to conflicts. If it's just because of jealousy, I don't see what this approach is doing. If this is done for religious beliefs, there are many, many ways, instead of this stupidest method. Thrall can become a king, or he can make everyone surrender to the Hidden God and use his identity as a king. Anyway, I feel like I'm a bad dog.

First of all, I read this article in one go and it was pretty good. . . But, what was Sal doing in the end? . Is it because I don't have enough IQ? Even though I finished watching it, the os in my mind later on was about what he was doing. . Can't we simply fall in love? . .

I think, well, really, attacking shouldn't be like this. I felt like I was almost there, if I persisted for a while. It feels so rushed later on. It's better not to read the comments before reading. I read the comments this time. . . .

In fact, the writing part about setting up the Creator is pretty good, but the relationship aspect seems a bit rushed when they are together.

If Sal hadn't interfered with the conflict between the various ethnic groups in the Kingdom of God and Earth when Pan Ting had to deal with it, causing the people to misunderstand that Pan Ting was an evil god, wouldn't everything have been fine? ?

Archeology, my least favorite attack in the cake article, I feel it is better

To be honest, the first 60 chapters are all about the coercion, betrayal and deception, and then there is a blunt happy ending... Seriously, is this happy ending a happy ending? I'm not a diss author, but this attack is really disgusting.

Everyone said that Sal's transformation was too sudden and too rigid. I think so too. And there was always little support from behind, which was also uncomfortable.

It feels like the emotional aspect is too rushed, and it can even be said to be unfinished. No, it starts to go bad from the middle. It shouldn't be a mistake that an experienced writer like Panzi would make.