The Fake Voice Box

Hahahahahaha. Come on, keep writing. Xiong Kuai lets me get some air

Su Da is so cute, and Ling Hao is so funny!

Preface The first list of recommendations for the new year is mine! Hahahahaha I finally have a list of nominees! Today's children who place orders are getting lazy and don't want to turn over the clerk's order_(:3)∠)_If we always say "whatever", we will feel very unfulfilled! Let me tell you in secret, basically as long as you don't rush to browse the store manager's brand, naming other store employees on duty will be more effective than directly saying "anyone can"... This way the store employees will not feel like they are the boss! How happy to be named! How boring it is to be randomly assigned tasks... Kiss, I love you ╭(╯3╰)╮I gave it to you for the first time, and you are so beautiful, I will definitely be very warm and affectionate. Above. Don't mind the devilish style of painting just now, I am still a very serious person^_^. It's been a while since I took an order, so I might be a bit unskilled, but I hope you don't find it objectionable. Okay, enough chatter, let's get down to the real show—— Text After reading the girl's articles these days, I would like to first say that I don't know much about the field of pseudo-sound, and my level of understanding is limited to "hearing about it". It can be seen that the girl is very serious about showing the true face of this field to readers, about the struggles, entanglements, bitterness, pain, joy and emotions of young people. I can feel your love for the subject you chose, which is good - the prerequisite for all article writing is "love". I like this subject, I want to express it, and I want to write everything about it - if you don't have the feeling of "love" yourself, you certainly can't make readers fall in love with your article. Therefore, emotion is the key to the success of the article. You have this premise, so I want to say that you are better than many authors who only pile up empty words. This is what I think is your greatest strength. But we must also realize that it is not enough for a good article to be emotional. Regarding areas that need improvement, let's first talk about the presentation of this article. After reading the full text, as a layman in the field of pseudo-sound, my most intuitive feeling is that... I am a little confused. I don't know, girl, have you read any successful game novels or workplace novels? One of the very important qualities that make them so popular is that they can make people who don't play games and people who are not in the workplace—that is, people who know nothing about the field they describe—also be infected by them, attracted by their plots, and then become interested in the professional part they describe. There are many novels related to online matching that are very good in this aspect. At least I once had the idea of ​​becoming a CV because of some online matching novels. If you passionately want to make your favorite field known to more people, then you must first use relevant stories to attract readers who otherwise know nothing about this field, right? And I have to say that this is the biggest weakness of this article. The words you write are more like "professional diaries" than "stories" - your peers may be able to easily understand what you are talking about, so they can ignore the lack of interest in it, but as lay readers, they may be confused from the beginning and lose interest in continuing to read and continue to understand the field of pseudophonics. In my personal opinion, you can try to make the difference between the daily life plot of the characters and the plot of the pseudo-dubbing drama more obvious. For example, if you use pseudo-sounds to make fun things in your daily life, it will make people feel cute and interesting if it happens occasionally, but if it happens often... It will make people feel a little strange? Just like certain personalities can be very cute as embellishments, but always appearing will make readers feel that this character is a bit abnormal... Of course, the above are just my personal feelings. I am just giving my opinions. After all, the article is the author's own treasure. Whether it needs to be changed or not depends entirely on the author's own ideas. Let's talk about character creation. When the girl placed her order, she also concluded that some male characters are too feminine... In fact, this is a flaw in many danbi novels. After all, the authors themselves have a daughter's heart, and it is difficult to portray male characters without deviation at all. But this is a problem that must be overcome. I can say that no other problem in Danmei novels is as serious as the problem of "feminization of male characters". Generally, readers who like Danmei like the intensity of the emotional collision between men that is different from men and women - I became a fujoshi because I like strength, not strength or the combination of strength and weakness... The conflict and fusion of pure strong emotions of the same sex is the essence of Danmei. Once the "male characters are feminized", for many readers, this means that the article cannot be called Danmei. In order to write an article before, I also specifically went to understand the thoughts of boys, read some books, and asked the boys around me about some things that often appear in the plot of the article (some are straight and some are curved), so if you don't mind, I would like to give you some suggestions on character creation. 1. The male character's inner activities must be simple. Of course, it depends on the attribute to determine whether it needs to be added or subtracted appropriately. For example, boys who complain about the attribute can have more noisy psychological activities, and boys who are delicate can think about conspiracy theories in their minds. But things like "Does he not love me anymore" are things that girls often think about... Never put it on a male character, unless what you want to write is a transvestite. 2. Language! Top priority! A character's language can express his personality, but of course the first thing to express is his gender! Pass all Qiong Yao's lines! Pass all sticky lines! If you're a man, be direct. You can hesitate but don't be coy! 3. Character description... Needless to say, words like weak, slender, shy, etc. That are frequently used to describe women are best not to be used... After all, no matter how beautiful a boy is, there is still a difference between a boy and a girl. Even if he is prettier than a girl, it still feels wrong. Above. After looking at the length... I'm really sorry that I wrote so much in the heat of the moment. It's been too long since I've written, and the style of painting in the lists has become more and more bizarre recently, so I can't hold back when I encounter a list that's passable... Girl, I'm actually quite optimistic about you. Pseudo-acoustic novels are a brand new field. If you work hard, you might be able to create a new era. Every child who is willing to write well is an angel. I hope you can persist all the way, grow up, and finally get what you want. Finally, thank you again for giving me my first name - I will mark it well on my own documents. Fighting for your Dreams! Illegal gathering produced by Chang Ping Pu ——By donggong

What's going on with this interface that blinds me? I feel like I've clicked into a magical interface~ It's like realizing for the first time that I'm looking at Danmei, the feeling of a magical door opening.

... I haven't seen one before... So are there any false sounds in our overlapping fields oWO! I also practiced for a few months last winter, but later I had to give up due to professional issues. The sound is a little softer now than it was last year.

Suda: I am innocent but I am afraid, I will not protect you! ~ Innocence: Come on, open your mouth and take the medicine.

She just has confidence, Suda will definitely sit over. (Already thought wrongly) The arrogant and sinister loli is really piapia... I love chasing Ling Hao Guo Guo~

Ha, ha, ha Good literary talent Here is the star biubiubiu

Ling Hao's sister Ling Shuangxue?! What do you think of Ling Hao? 23333

He even stepped on the little bear. I wonder if he will kill him... Wash the little bear...