The Ghost King Is Hard to Handle II

I have a lot of space left in my heart, but it's a pity that I will never be able to see him again in this life.

Is this a trap? Have no choice…

... What should I tell the author? Difficult childbirth!

I jumped into the pit silently. The author is a big help.

When will it be updated (??????)? Send you flowers

Decided to leave a review The writing technique and logic of this novel are not good enough. Such direct criticism may make you feel uncomfortable... But to be honest, it is difficult to control the first-person narrative. The meaningless content of the dialogue between the protagonist and supporting characters is too high. The setting of the events in the story can be said to be a willful suggestion for writing. Read more information before. Imagination is a very important element in writing, but imagination alone is not enough. The overall writing is incoherent and I stumbled here. Personally, I don't have high requirements for Lily Xiang's works... It may be that the shortcomings of small people in the circle who write less are unavoidable. But if no one is competing in the circle, please look outside. I'm very sorry for saying some unpleasant things here in a harsh tone.

Ah, I've been waiting for a long time...

Based on what was said before [Xiao Qi has a face that can easily deceive others, but if you think about it carefully, you will find that his palace is not consistent with his young and handsome face. ] Plus [This kind of shameful thing, even if you get the advantage of rejuvenation or immortality, you have to pay for it with something else. If that is an important person in his clan] Director Yu, I beg you, don't let this drama of immortality happen again... Drama... Drama... Code

The two upstairs come to have a fight.

It's very beautiful and seems to be faster than the wall_(:з∠)_