When they were children, she made a fuss beneath the peach blossoms, and he teased her.
Yet, after that heart-stopping moment, she embarked on a love from which there was no turning back.
She watched with her own eyes as he married someone else. She made a scene, but all she got in return was the faintest smile at the corner of his lips.
In the end, one line was all it took: "Like fish swimming in a river, paired eyes split apart halfway."
Everything turned to the ravages of time.
This is my first story. I hope you'll be patient with me and offer plenty of suggestions.
It seems things progressed too quickly; many things weren't fully understood before things moved on = = It feels really sad though~ The writing is quite good; it made my nose tingle a little while reading QAQ
Good job, keep it up, fantastic!