Breaking Through the Ten Thousand Men to Become a Powerful Senior Brother
突破万男强师兄
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 70k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
22Chapters
65Favorites
9.0Score
1.4kClicks per chapter
14Comments
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Supplementary points I have always liked this author.
Is this article mainly offensive and passive?
Tell me where Xiao Gong is! The copywriting is so cute!
Kindness? Have you smoked in Jinjiang? Why do I feel like this chapter is not over yet?
My writing style is very interesting and unique, and the language is relaxed and humorous, which is very interesting. I guarded the entire scene. If you keep at it, you will definitely become a great god, come on (⊙o⊙)!
This chapter is so simple, yet there is so much to learn!
The pig's feet are very vividly shaped, keep up the good work! 100200
How should I put it... This kind of modern colloquial writing style paired with the theme of cultivation, it feels a bit subtle... It feels like the author is creating flaws but the flaws are not obvious... Moreover, the perspective changes a bit quickly. One second it was the perspective of the protagonist, and the next second it switches to the psychological description of the supporting character. The protagonist needs to be angry, hey, if this continues, he will become an Akarin! What I want to see is the heart-throb Eldest Brother!
Did the author want to write that one sentence becomes a prophecy... Although it is true that one sentence becomes a proverb, it looks weird...