
[Natsume] How Do I Get Out of Being Turned into a Book of Friends?
[夏目]穿成友人帐怎么破
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 11k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
5Chapters
400Favorites
8.4Score
10.9kClicks per chapter
16Comments
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Ah, ah, ah, ah, it's too short. And why is there no meat? There is no meat residue. Personal opinion, it's a bit rushed. I should make it longer and more detailed, and then add some meat. Ahem! The ending is not detailed either. It is clearly a good article with over 100,000 words. The author would like to ask if there are still two thirds of the meaty part that he forgot to write.
I looked confused and said, "Isn't Tian Xie Gui the grass snake's Mente?"
Isn't that Ritsu Iijima?
Although the heroine chose to be with Natsume, I still think the heroine was a bit willful and simply abandoned her relatives and friends. Note: I am just expressing my thoughts. Don't be angry, sir.
I'm so happy to receive Luo Luo's congratulations (*/ω\*) Recently, I have been busy with studies in various Shura fields, being taught human dignity, being crushed, committing crimes, opening huge pits, and so on... But I still took time out of my busy schedule to masturbate to Chang Ping La (*/ω\*), although it took a little longer [What the hell I have always thought that Natsume is cute and there are so many male heroes. I was dazzled to pick Xipi and finally found out that Luoluo's true love is a hunter or something ╮(╯▽╰)╭ but I am really grateful. Because over the years... I have been doing everything solo, and my friends are all stealth experts, so I really have to give a thumbs up to finding a little angel like Luoluo√ Well, first of all, for Luo Luo, who has never seen Natsume's super high school-level dango chef, it is already a very difficult thing. But precisely because of this, Natsume's character description is not very outstanding. I mentioned last time that Luo Luo's plot has changed now, so I'm super excited about this (*/ω\*) Natsume seemed to have a bit of a breakdown at the end →_→, but it's normal for any character to have a breakdown when someone else confesses. The heroine's character is probably a bit of a slut but she can be serious at critical moments? (I'm definitely not the prototype. I know it, believe me √) Ahem, [What the Hell] Lolo has been involved in various plots over the years. In addition, it is a short story. Lolo is busy writing plots and directly ignores the characterization of the character. The character's personality can only be judged from the dialogue. Of course, I believe that the short story also plays a part in the reason. I won't mention it. The plot is a little blurry and I can't clearly see what the plot is. Although it is a short story, I think the plot is very important. It starts with the beginning, then the daily life in the middle, and finally Natsume's confession. Although the plot is very smooth, the narrative is a bit vague. Luoluo's articles have never had any major problems. The articles should be concise where the wording should be concise, and refined when they should be, and sometimes they should be embellished appropriately. Because it is a short story, this just highlights Lolo's superb summary ability. Compared to people like me who like to complain and like nonsense... Ahem, I won't say anything. As the saying goes, love grows with time, and I really don't like quick heat. It's obviously a short story, but it has the flavor of a long novel. This is great. I have read many short stories before, including some of Luoluo Ni's dark history →_→ Although it is a short story, it must not be a running account, but Luoluo, this article doesn't make people feel like it's a running story. You really explained what you wanted to write (I don't know if it's because there are five articles) but it's still a bit vague. Regardless of this, it's still great to read the whole article without reading it (*/ω\*) From various aspects of the article, it can be seen that Luo Luo is really not good at healing. If we just talk about style and theme, the score will definitely be unqualified →_→ But Luo Luo's writing style accounts for a large part of the advantage. Although it can be seen that Luo Luo is trying his best to express the feeling of healing. As a gay friend, I am really touched. (*/ω\*) As for the overall review, I give Luoluo a ninety or more. The wording is clean and concise. Except for some flaws in the plot, other aspects are worthy of praise as always. √ Because this week is really too busy, so the long review is really the last day of the week. It is really hopeless. OTZ. Although I really want to apologize or something, but I better not be verbose. Qwq In short, no matter what, Luoluo, who loves writing and has good skills, should work hard (*/ω\*) Illegal gathering produced by Chang Ping Pu BY Arabic This is so full of love... I suddenly remembered the two birthday congratulations I owe you OTZ
Isn't the male protagonist Natsume?
Collected, the heroine will turn back into a human body, the classically beautiful heroine is my favorite
When will the second chapter be updated? 😜
Fluffy... Girly threesome?
Is the heroine wearing it? 😲 It's the second floor😘