Marital Fate

Review of "Marriage" When I opened the web page and saw the page of this article, I found it interesting as soon as I saw the copy. The subject matter is very interesting and suitable for being made into a TV series or movie, urban comedy. I rarely see articles on this subject on the Internet. It is indeed very creative, but this subject also brings a lot of controversy because it involves moral issues. After all, the public rejects mistresses. Don't worry about who is right or wrong, just destroying other people's families is enough for many people to despise and despise you. But we won't talk about morality today, only this article. This is not the first time I have read Haruko's articles, nor is it the first time I have written a review for her. It seems like a long time since the last time. Haruko should also know my style of judging. Since she named me, she should be mentally prepared, right? First, the characters. When I complained about Summer's Edge, my first reaction was the Minute Maid, ahem, orange one. Okay, no kidding. This heroine seems to be a person with a story, otherwise she would not be doing such a strange job in such a strange place. I won't comment on her personality, I will just say that the portrayal of this character is much better than the previous one. Maybe she is a woman who has been hurt by love, and now she is doing this to take revenge on society, but just by looking at the first chapter, the character's character is very clear, which is equivalent to establishing the protagonist. This is great, because one of the most important aspects of writing a novel is to create characters that will stick with readers. Furthermore, writing style, that is, writing style. The writing at the beginning is neither fast nor slow, clean and neat, and has a certain degree of tightness and tightness. Compared with the past, I often went too far, but this time I have improved! And the profession of the protagonist is clearly stated at the beginning. This profession will also be a main thread of this article. The heroine is a professional mistress. This special profession will definitely arouse the curiosity of some people and want to see what will happen to her in the future. This main plot is very clean and clear, and I knew right away that the heroine of this article must continue to have an entanglement with the man she had an entanglement with before. Because that man should be the male protagonist, right? Her wife wanted to ask her to identify whether the male protagonist was emotionally loyal, and the female protagonist happened to have loved this man once, and she still seemed to have feelings for him now. For such a main plot, I can only think of three: one is that the heroine and the hero fall in love again, and then the hero dumps his wife and rekindles their relationship with the heroine; one is that the heroine is revengeful, seduces the man's heart again, successfully destroys his family, and finally retires; one is that the hero is emotionally firm and is not tempted, and the heroine returns without success. Of course, the possibility of the third one is very low, otherwise I wouldn't be able to write this article. Because such a loyal man will make people like him very much. In contrast, he will hate the heroine even more. This is terrible! In this case, the evaluation of this article will definitely be DOWN! The first ending is very bloody, and the possibility that readers will like it is not high, because there are many flaws, and the most important thing is that the male protagonist is a scumbag, and the female protagonist is cheap... Ahem, okay, the mistress kicks the main wife, no matter what, normal people won't like it, right? No one wants to be the first wife who was kicked out by the mistress, and no one wants to be the mistress. Then the most promising one is the second ending, which is very enjoyable to write. There is actually a market for this kind of revenge novel!! As long as you add a rich, handsome suitor and change the male lead, many people will read this article. Now that we've talked about the characters, writing, and plot, let's finally talk about some details. I found that you started to play with literature and art again, this time not with poetry, probably because you accepted my suggestion. However, you have started writing healing texts similar to youth literature again. The first sentence of the chapter is a double-edged sword. Good writing will make people feel amazing. For example, the prefaces of some famous writers are very philosophical and thought-provoking, or the words are concise and concise enough to clarify the character of the characters. In short, it will not make people feel that they are playing around with literary talent and talking nonsense. Your chapter opening sentence is not included in this list. Maybe some of them do express your feelings and are still acceptable. But because you have a lot of chapters, you have to write a chapter introduction for each chapter, and you actually don't have that deep understanding. This will make you feel inadequate, thus lowering the quality of your chapter introduction. This can easily give readers the feeling that you are showing off, but your writing is not very good. Maybe you can say that there is actually foreshadowing in this and it is the key to the plot, but who would care? Digging a hole is a technical job. Only when people are willing to jump in can there be subsequent surprises. Once no one cares, your hole will be dug in vain and you will make yourself embarrassed. Generally speaking, there is a big improvement compared to the last time. The subject matter of this article is indeed a bit different and belongs to the unpopular subject category. But if you write well, you may not be able to soar into the sky. Keep working hard! Above. Floating light leaping into gold·White dew frost river

Topic: [Red Scarf] Review Shop Life is just a play, we will meet again if we are destined or not. Years are nothing but a dream, and you can't tell what is inside the dream or what is outside the dream. Hello, Youqing, this is An An, and the following only represents An An's personal opinions. If you feel any discomfort, come and bite me! [If there are any similarities, you must have seen it wrong, touch it] Let's first talk about the highlights of this article and my overall personal feelings about it. 1. The subject matter is relatively new. As a reader downstairs said, the author who can write this kind of article is also a pervert. But An An liked it very much. Because after watching too many themes about a domineering president falling in love with me, I feel all kinds of aesthetic fatigue. I feel that all modern literature has followed the same routine. No matter what the decimal number is, you can always see the traces of several great masters if you look at the details. This plot is so similar that I can't bear to look at it. But this is the first time I have seen this kind of mistress place. An An said: Youqing, I am optimistic about you! 2. Like the home page again. One firm's promotional tone fits the subject matter of this article perfectly. And the short copywriting at the front is also very eye-catching. Next is the introduction of this series (is it a series?), Which has the atmosphere of a madam 233333... 3. An An really wants to learn from your writing style, Nai He. What I write is ancient Chinese proverbs!! So I have no choice but to complain, complain, and envy here. The sourness and helplessness between the lines is not something ordinary people can bear. I can't believe it if it is not a masochistic article. 4. The plot is arranged very cleverly. I won't praise you in detail. If you continue to praise me, people will think you are my good friend== Let's talk about some minor flaws in this article. 1. The biggest flaw I feel is at the beginning of each chapter. If you write a short paragraph or a few literary sentences at the beginning of most of your writing, it is best to have it in every chapter, rather than having it in some places and not in others. 2. To start with, the sentence that follows part 1, the first sentence of each chapter, should preferably be related to the content of this chapter, whether it is an exclamation or a summary, it should be related to the theme of the chapter you are writing now. Otherwise, each sentence may seem beautiful, but it will be uncomfortable if the preface and the follower are not matched. It seems slightly intentional. 3. Catching insects is very important, catch insects! Although all readers have their own translation systems, don't let people activate this function frequently. 4. Others, there is nothing else, it is simply too hard to be venomous. . . . Hope to keep up the good work. Mwah. By An'an [Don't call me Lei Feng, please call me Red Scarf]

Changing it to revenge or something would be more acceptable. . .

Changing it to revenge or something would be more acceptable. . .

I think it's very bad to write the heroine into this kind of profession. No reason can be used as an excuse to destroy other people's marriages.

This is what someone said to me. What you look down on is not necessarily what you can do. What you envy is not something you can get even if you work hard. What you dismiss is actually what you want most.

It's perverted to think of an author writing this kind of article, but I like it, hahahaha. I want to open a real business in real life, with detectives and mistresses, but this is the first time I've seen such a professional mistress. It's so professional. If the author doesn't write articles any day, let's open a company together.

Huahua I like your writing very much

Huahua! The male protagonist is Beiba

Looking forward to the next one, I want to know, who is the male protagonist? Elder brother? Chick?