
[Hunter X Hunter] Stop, You Shorty Up Ahead
[猎人]站住,前面的矮子
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It's nice. Let's write more about hunters.
I really want to complain about something... It's obviously a very short article, but the system settings actually take up such a long space.
Want Chrollo to become a player? Holy shit! Good luck!
Well written! Love Feitan, can you write a long article next time? ⊙▽⊙ Favorite column
Finally there is a side story><So happy!!
□The author is asking for extra stories! ! ! !
Not completed Title of work: [Hunter] Stop, the dwarf in front of you Author: Jiuge Liluo Article link: http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=2208286 Article type: Fanfiction-romance-alternative history-animation Article word count: 14610 words short story completed Already submitted to several reviews: None Long review requirements: optional Shopkeepers who want to hook up: Yuruo, the little angel from the Hunter fandom on the West Wall can come and QAQ in my bowl Whether to accept transfer orders: Yes Introduction to the article: The trend of online games is easy, Xipi Feitan, mixed with the three beauties, Xiake If you walk too much at night, will you fall into an uncovered sewer? Is it heart-breaking for you to encounter a malicious system master all over the world? You said you were just selling height-increasing drugs, but your target is a violent torture expert. How painful is it? Damn it, stop, that short guy in front is wrong. This is Master Tanzi. Do you need height-increasing medicine? QAQ. [1St floor] Netizen: Canghai Jiuge [2014-09-01 12:22:04] Done, go and code Natsume [2nd floor] Netizen: Luoluo [2014-09-01 12:23:43] I really am not here to cause trouble QAQ, please be pampered by the little angel [3rd floor] Netizen: Ayu [2014-09-01 19:46:46] I'm here to take the order. It will be out in about three days =3= How about we suffer first and then enjoy it☆? Although it is a short story, the pace is so fast that I can't keep up. Speaking of which, Luoluo, your writing is still so hilarious and hilarious with its own complaints_(:3∠)_After reading it, I actually don't know where to start. Luoluo used a lot of memes, but the pace was too fast and I couldn't comprehend it, and there were too many complaints that reduced the interest of the article →_→ I admit that I have never seen a short story with such a fast pace. Please allow me to vomit three liters of blood. I feel that all my brain cells have been exhausted_(:3″∠)_ Although it is a short story, the plot jumps so fast that you can't keep up with the rhythm, but many of the humorous and humorous words in it make people laugh. If I comment in such serious language, you will definitely be despised →_→. I just read the next paragraph because the pace was too fast... "What's going on? Did I miss something?" This thought stayed with me from the first chapter to the end of the third chapter_(:3∠)_. I'm very happy that Feitan didn't collapse, but Luo Luo, you never collapse, so I can't find fault with you, Tu Yan. (Hey In a short story, you should at least describe the relationship between the two of you. Is it really okay to just go over it in one sentence? The heroine just stalked Feitan to buy height-enhancing drugs and then suddenly fell in love with each other. You should at least write a sentence with a little emotion like "I don't know when, but I'm not used to being without her." The relationship between these two people looks so baffling to me that I won't tell you. In other words, you are just as irresponsible as my feelings for a certain daughter of mine♂ Hey (someone got an arrow in the knee) I hope Luoluo won't mess with such a fast-paced short story again. In fact, this article can only make people complain about its pale emotions and slightly suspenseful plot. Luoluo's article seems to give people a very clear and clear feeling. The words are concise and concise. You know what you should write and what you shouldn't write. It's not like some people's articles that ramble on a lot, nor like me, a funny guy who drags out the male protagonist and female protagonist for more than ten chapters and is just ambiguous. It makes people vomit blood, and it is so slow that I want to kill you (I'm improving, don't worry about me_(:3∠)_) Luoluo, you go straight to the topic. Although the amount of information is a bit large, if you look closely, this is really a clear-cut article. The heroine of Luoluo gave me a strong image concept from beginning to end, persistence. Although it is a short story, the heroine is probably shameless and has to rely on her sharp tongue to complete the task of the cold-blooded system master. Those scenes you omitted must also be very cute. 2333333 Also, in the article, the three beauties of the hunter and the knight can explain the characteristics of the characters in just a few sentences. This shows that Luoluo, your summary ability is very powerful. If it were not a short story, this article would be more exciting. In addition, the heroine gave birth to a little boy in the back, I would like to congratulate w At the end, I will use my own nonsense╮(╯▽╰)╭For me, Luoluo is also a very good big sister-type character. She always helps me correct my mistakes and I will correct them. Although it is a bit weird, I think it is great to get to know you. As Luoluo writes, I hope you will gain more and your writing will get better and better. Anyway, please keep working hard! (Now that you've signed the contract, you shouldn't be grinding away every day to type faster. Huh, I don't care about you, you piece of shit!) The above is just my personal opinion BY Illegal Party Chang Ping Pu Arabic Produced
It's only three chapters and it's over! ! ! ! ! ? It's too hasty! ! ! ? And T_T what about the soldier commander we promised T_T It's too much T_T It's all over like this T_T
What exactly is the second form = =|||
Oh my God! ! ! ! We have all the baby papers! ! ! Why do you still recommend the system? What kind of cheating system is this? !