Reborn: The Center of the Circle

Are you sure you are very defensive? As for modern people who are a little defensive and confess their love after just a few meetings, which is completely unreliable, the heroine is actually heartbroken. I have never understood it. Isn't it annoying at first? How come I fell in love with her after only two meetings? ? Not many words have been said. Is it because the male protagonist and the female protagonist have too much aura? So Mary Sue

When writing a novel for the first time, it's better not to assume that the heroine is an old goblin who has gone through many vicissitudes of life. Firstly, it's the writing style, and secondly, the rhythm and plot. If you don't grasp it well, it's easy to get occ. But it doesn't matter if the author is also an old goblin, but it doesn't look like the author. Finally, I think the writers are all super awesome, come on! ! !

After reading this chapter, I thought about the happy ending of END

The heroine I like is a girl with a soft appearance and a fierce heart, but her skills and strength are full, and the cheats are too strong, so I don't like her.

Let me tell you, today's update will probably be very late, probably into the early morning::>_<::

Oh oh oh, this is Madoka Magica o(^_-)O

The author's entire article is well conceived, but poorly written. . . . It's hard to say

The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist develops too fast, and it is impossible to feel how the male protagonist likes the female protagonist. The male protagonist is a soldier, is this really good? If all the Huaxia Kingdom had soldiers like this, then the Huaxia Kingdom would be hopeless.

The plot is good, but I always feel that the character created by the male protagonist and the love story are so boring.

I always feel like a big white dog that can talk isn't that cute! Or only the heroine can understand it? If we treat them as companions, the barking barking in front always seems to be malicious and cute.