Apocalypse: The Female Lead Development System

Update quickly, the word count is too few

You won't give the Qiankun ring to Ouyang brother and sister later, right? If that's the case, then I really want to abandon the article... And is the author so reluctant to use punctuation marks? Often there is no pause for a long paragraph, and I can't breathe after reading it (laughing and crying)

Grading and discarding the article, I really can't stand it anymore.

Isn't the male protagonist a spiritual type? The heroine also speculates that he is very strong. How can the heroine enter the space directly without fear of being discovered? ? !

It looks good. Please update it soon.

The punctuation point (#‵′) is so convex that it makes me feel tired. Is there anything wrong with it?

It's too white. I stopped here. It makes me vomit blood.

There were too many mistakes, not just typos, missing words, missing words, but also names of people and bases. . Didn't the author read it himself after he finished writing?

"Trying to concentrate her mental power bit by bit, an arrow made of Qi was being synthesized not far away. Qin Yiyi frowned and her face turned pale. Qin Yiyi closed her eyes tightly and bit her lip with her teeth. Her head was swollen and painful. Qin Yiyi could only hold on hard at this time. She knew that as long as this step passed There will be achievements later. The arrows in the distance are coming and going. Qin Yiyi's body is shaking, and the whole person looks like a fragile glass doll. Looking at the arrow that is finally shot on the tree, Qin Yiyi relaxes and collapses to the ground. Damn it, Qin Yiyi is not sure if his life will be decided here. " ... Why are there so many Qin Yiyi? Don't you think it's very uncomfortable?

Oh my God! Typos are everywhere, I can't stand it anymore!