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A new article has been opened, with the theme of quick travel. Welcome to "(Quick Travel) Traveling in Three Thousand Realms".
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This article is a love story about lilies, with rich categories, such as time-travel fantasy, ancient sayings, and rebirth of fans.
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Reader comments
It is indeed a bit confusing to watch, mainly because the time travel in science is mixed with the power of family totems, there are many timelines, and the relationships between the characters are complicated. There is no reference point ten years ago or ten years later. To be honest, I think your writing is quite good and the subject matter is good. I really don't have enough ability to control it. (The score is zero because the mobile phone cannot score)
It's really a flaw that I didn't read the original work... T_T Don't get me wrong, V, I am not a good partner, dear! ! !
Come on! ! ! ! ! ! Very nice!
As long as there are people, there will be strife
Damn, is this going to Lily's rhythm? (Manual funny)
As long as you work hard enough, an iron pestle can be ground into a needle? ? ?
I think Jin Rui will not get divorced from Xiao Shaer~~~~~ Rui Rui said it before she got married~~ She will only marry a man who puts himself first~~~~
(*/ω＼*)Continue to support
It's just a beginning, but it's marked as finished
At least both of them are alive and there are no amnesia or other ridiculous plots. It can really be regarded as HE... But in the end, did Xiaoyi and Natasha merge...? = =
I feel like there are too many ideas mentioned by adults... It takes a long time... It's a bit cumbersome... It also makes me a little confused... However, I'd better come here and support it!
The review is finally out!
JJ has a shop that can make covers, so it's okay to ask Wangshou to help~
Catch bugs
Complain to
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Tao
Damn, I really like your writing style and words (?>?
What? My comments are gone again. My wife wrote wonderfully! I don't know why there are so few people watching and commenting. I think it may be because my wife is just starting out. Don't be discouraged. Keep updating and there will be more and more posts. Poi is really good at solving cases and beating up bad guys!
Give me a score~encourage me~
The writing style is very good~ But I would like to give you a suggestion. Sometimes you don't need to specifically emphasize and describe the characters, such as the environment or other descriptions of feelings. Just go to the end and intersperse it appropriately, but not too much. After the dialogue between the characters, sometimes you should write a name, otherwise I will feel like I can't tell who is who at a glance orz
Beautiful sentences are enjoyable to read, but too many of them seem cumbersome~
Anyway, come on~
It is indeed a bit confusing to watch, mainly because the time travel in science is mixed with the power of family totems, there are many timelines, and the relationships between the characters are complicated. There is no reference point ten years ago or ten years later. To be honest, I think your writing is quite good and the subject matter is good. I really don't have enough ability to control it. (The score is zero because the mobile phone cannot score)
It's really a flaw that I didn't read the original work... T_T Don't get me wrong, V, I am not a good partner, dear! ! !
Come on! ! ! ! ! ! Very nice!
As long as there are people, there will be strife
Damn, is this going to Lily's rhythm? (Manual funny)
As long as you work hard enough, an iron pestle can be ground into a needle? ? ?
I think Jin Rui will not get divorced from Xiao Shaer~~~~~ Rui Rui said it before she got married~~ She will only marry a man who puts himself first~~~~
(*/ω＼*)Continue to support
It's just a beginning, but it's marked as finished
At least both of them are alive and there are no amnesia or other ridiculous plots. It can really be regarded as HE... But in the end, did Xiaoyi and Natasha merge...? = =
I feel like there are too many ideas mentioned by adults... It takes a long time... It's a bit cumbersome... It also makes me a little confused... However, I'd better come here and support it!
The review is finally out! JJ has a shop that can make covers, so it's okay to ask Wangshou to help~ Catch bugs Complain to ———————— Tao
Damn, I really like your writing style and words (?>?
What? My comments are gone again. My wife wrote wonderfully! I don't know why there are so few people watching and commenting. I think it may be because my wife is just starting out. Don't be discouraged. Keep updating and there will be more and more posts. Poi is really good at solving cases and beating up bad guys!
Give me a score~encourage me~ The writing style is very good~ But I would like to give you a suggestion. Sometimes you don't need to specifically emphasize and describe the characters, such as the environment or other descriptions of feelings. Just go to the end and intersperse it appropriately, but not too much. After the dialogue between the characters, sometimes you should write a name, otherwise I will feel like I can't tell who is who at a glance orz Beautiful sentences are enjoyable to read, but too many of them seem cumbersome~ Anyway, come on~