How Lucky I Was to Have You (GL)

Planning to watch it again from the beginning

"Have I ever been so lucky" This is a story about a mistress and her first wife who kicked off the scumbag and finally got married. At first, Zhuyu didn't know whether the author really felt that his writing power was insufficient, or whether he didn't write very carefully. Just because, in Zhuyu's eyes, this article can be said to be a semi-finished product, or in other words, this article is a conceptual product. The author only supports the framework, and there is almost no substance. It's not so much a short novel as it is a detailed outline of a short story. All I can say is that the concept of the story is good, but the execution is not. You don't have anything specific, so it's actually difficult to comment. You must know that no matter how short a novel is, it must first have a core concept, which is what idea your article expresses. This vacancy can reduce even the most wonderful novel to a mere anecdote. Stories are always written around a principle. Throughout the text, the author deals with it as if there is no core concept. In fact, after communicating with the author later, Zhuyu learned that the core of this article was to express, "Scumbags should be abandoned decisively. The first wife and the mistress actually don't have much hatred and can even be together." Then the problem arises. Here, the key points that the author should focus on are: First: Why should a scumbag be abandoned decisively? Second: Why don't the first wife and the mistress have much hatred? Third: Why should the first wife and the mistress be together. When dealing with the first point, the author explained it through discussion, while the second and third points were hardly explained at all. The reason why the author's story is not like a story is that the plot should be expressed either through argumentative techniques or not at all. The author should imagine a story, which is divided into three parts. The first one tells how a man is such a scumbag and how he redeems his woman, but the result is getting worse and worse. This is used to demonstrate the first point. The second plot is that the first wife and the mistress were originally at odds with each other, but after experiencing a series of events, they discovered that the source of their conflicts had never been with each other. It was others who caused their innate hostility. Then it was written that after they put down their hostile relationship, they discovered that the first wife and the mistress were actually the people who understood each other best in life. For example, if you like a man, he will explain that he has similar tastes and so on, so as to deduce that the first wife may be the most suitable for the mistress. In short, this step by step is constructed from an organized plot. In the future, when writing something, the author can first put forward the concept he wants to express, and then think about what kind of story can support your point of view. As for other aspects, such as whether the writing is good or not, the author can first sort out the story and then consider it. The above is a review of Zhuyu, the mascot of Qiancheng City, and the author is welcome to visit our store next time.

Isn't it? ? ? It's over like this, it's so deceptive! ! !

Isn't it a trap? ? ?

Isn't it daily? It's been two days