
(Soldier Fanfiction) The Wager
(士兵同人)赌注
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 31k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
22Chapters
94Favorites
10.0Score
1.8kClicks per chapter
35Comments
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Is it because I always care about Tie Da being the male protagonist, so I feel that many plots are belittling the female protagonist and making her feel boring? For example, if she has a bad relationship with girls, there are always girls who like Tie Da but no boys like the heroine.
How should I put it? I think that for me, feelings may be very pure. Since I like someone, I will keep a distance from other people. To me, I like someone but still accept other people's overtures. This is not like me. Therefore, I feel uncomfortable about the heroine's situation. I feel that the person I fell in love with first is the loser.
😭 😭 😭 I don't feel Tieda's love.
It's so well written, the youthful love story of the evil ancestor.
I think this book is well written, but it also has a lot of flaws. The good part is about the handling of female soldiers. The bad part ① is the female rivalry. The two female protagonists attacked the male protagonist because they fell in love with the male protagonist. At that time, the male and female protagonists only had an ordinary superior-subordinate relationship. Later, it can be said that the male protagonist had unrequited love. The male protagonist also hurt the female protagonist because of the female protagonist's words. Although they said they had good intentions, they did not allow the female protagonist to truly understand the male protagonist's character and personality. Although the motive was said to be reconciled later, I feel that it was not explained. It was completely impossible to communicate during the quarrel. If the author advocated abuse, it was completely speechless; ② Girls are squeamish, which I find more uncomfortable. They have been talking about it from the mouth of the heroine, from the narration, and from the mouths of the military school classmates; ③ The ending is too bad, the emotional line is too I'm in a hurry. The female protagonist is completely OOC. The advantage of Nian is that she understands communication and is tolerant. The two are already ten years apart. If the male protagonist treats the female protagonist like that, the female protagonist will not fall in love with the male protagonist at all. After the female protagonist gets married, she automatically takes a back seat. Later, she is transferred from the old A because of her future, and the puppy also suffers. I retired due to injury, don't read the last few chapters, because this is just what I explained in the last chapter [covering my face, laughing and crying]; 4. The heroine has no close female friends, so she can only hang out with boys. In college, she said that her female roommates have very good personalities, so she gradually became gregarious; 5. The heroine has been set up to be different, but I don't think there is any difference. In addition, I didn't understand the line between the female protagonist and her male classmate in this article. Is it really the female classmate who is driving a wedge between the female protagonist and her male classmate because the heroine said this female classmate is pretentious? If someone understands it, tell me. If it's true, that one is so consistent with 14 years. It should also be noted that Yuan Lang has a wife and children in this article. The reason why the comment two years ago said that Qi Huan was tortured was not because of Qi Huan's emotional connection, but because the male and female protagonists showed affection and tortured singles.
Why is it that Qi Huan is the one being tortured?
Hahahahahahaha railway you devil
Fortunately, my big brother Bai is not dead!!
So sad, is Abai really dead? Reminds me of Xiaomi, lovely Xiaomi
Fattening and waiting are over!! 2 Points for delivery