After Gu Nanyin perished in a secret realm, her soul was drawn into the Realm of Chaos. There, she saw everything happening in the present world and learned that the person who had killed her was a transmigrator. She had a spatial treasure and could see other people's fortunes. After Gu Nanyin died, the transmigrator absorbed her fortune. As she cultivates, she gathers handsome men along the way, and in the end, she achieves success. Cultivation levels: Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, Soul Separation, Spirit Division, Integration, Tribulation Transcendence, and Great Ascension. This story will be going premium in three days, this Sunday. Thank you, everyone, for your support. Those of you who keep reading after that are true fans. Mwah! There will be three chapters on launch day. Please do not repost. Thank you. This is the author's first story, so please forgive the immature writing.
Theme:
Water produces wood, and wood produces fire.
It's strange. Opportunities like this that can be obtained due to various requests should be within the scope of heaven's permission. Otherwise, if the monks are walking outside, wouldn't they dare not compete with everyone for the spiritual grass and the magic weapon over there? Such variables that can be changed due to human power are within the calculation range of heaven and should not be counted as robbing opportunities that do not belong to oneself. On the contrary, the time-traveling woman robs others of their luck. This is called robbing an opportunity that does not belong to her. The two cannot be compared. It's like a girl clamoring to her mother to buy candies, toys, and go to an amusement park. In the end, her mother can't bear to buy them for her. Although this girl is a naughty child, it's not illegal. There was a girl on the other side. Because she wanted the candy in the girl's hand, she killed the person without saying a word. This is a crime. Can the behavior of the two before and after be compared? Can we say that because the girl made trouble with her mother to buy candy, she deserved to be robbed and killed? The heroine's point of view is too terrifying. If she maintains this point of view, she doesn't need to continue to practice cultivation. Wouldn't she just follow the way of heaven and grow old obediently? This epiphany made me feel like I had a demon inside me.
I think the author's writing was okay, but the plot changed so quickly that I couldn't react. Are the time-traveling girl and her bracelet just for fun? She was all kinds of awesome before, but died instantly in the end! What the hell is that little boy? The author didn't even explain clearly and it ended! Also, I originally thought that Huan Yuan was the male protagonist, but it turned out to be a mess! Later, I was optimistic about my senior brother Bijun, but it didn't work out! I really didn't expect it to be without CP! I still like to read novels with CP.
Why couldn't others notice that she was introducing Qi into her body? Can this still be hidden? And! It turned out that there was really something wrong with the bracelet. . . I'll go. . . Such a clichéd setting, I'm tired of seeing it in any space!
The writing makes me uncomfortable
I always feel like the protagonist is not reborn
I have built the foundation in my previous life, so why am I still in the third level of Qi training at this time? Shouldn't the state of mind increase after being reborn? After all, the insights from the previous life are still there, so there should be some progress after being reborn. Judging from what the author writes, this world is relatively calm.
I felt like I had an epiphany as soon as I started, and I was appreciated in every way (I have described this scene many times) It feels a bit exaggerated... If you want to highlight the heroine, you don't need to praise her at the beginning...
I feel that the concept and some plots of this article are very similar to an article on QD!
Why didn't the heroine tell Lin Zhiya's suspicious points? If these powerful people knew about it, she could still rise. Anyway, Yi Jing is immortal. It seems that in order to arrange a strong opponent for the protagonist, she gave Lin Zhiya an immortal aura and gave Lin Zhiya's enemies a mentally retarded aura to make everyone deal with her. No matter how suspicious Lin Zhiya is, she won't do anything. It's like the rescued senior sister and master, if I were him, no matter what scruples he had, he would stab him to death with a sword, or even arrest him for torture. Not to mention that Lin Zhiya is so famous now, the senior sister still doesn't know who she is. I feel that the article is conflicting for the sake of conflict.