[Anime Crossover] Just Playing a Game, So Why Are We Shipping Them?

Although my writing style is immature, it is a good habit not to cheat on my writing. Come on

I feel like Ke Xiao's presence is so low. He's obviously a handsome guy, but he only notices Tsuna.

"A black-haired boy in a black suit is holding hands with a child in the same black suit, followed by a long-black-haired boy in a white suit." This description is also intoxicating. I didn't read the previous article and I don't know how it was written. I just watched Conan+Tutor, but this is too awesome.

I couldn't stand it after reading the first story.

First of all, give the author a thumbs up for his efforts! ! In addition, forgive me for being a die-hard tutoring fan, so I started reading directly from the tutoring chapter. What I want to say here is that the author needs to put a lot of effort into describing the environment. Because the words "Father Sun" and "Blue Sky" at the beginning left a deep impression on me. They are not even used to be cute. If the rhetorical ability is slightly insufficient, the author can try to use simple sentences to directly describe the environment. After all, oversimplified modifiers may have the opposite effect. What's a bit strange is that the author can write words like "piercing eyes", so why can't he use "blue sky"? Hmm... Is it because Xiaoyan has read too much? Then there is the problem of word choice. In fact, this is also a large part of the problem of environmental description. If you use it when making a formal commitment in the prison temple, it looks very funny and makes me laugh instantly. The word "funny" doesn't apply in this case, and I wonder if it would be better to use "ridiculous" instead. The writing also needs to have a sense of integrity. There is still a difference between written language and spoken language, even when writing a novel. Some colloquial sentences, such as the sentence "A Skylark Doesn't Bird Bird" pop up out of nowhere, do not match the overall style of the article. There is also the OOC problem, which is something that can't be helped. I talked a lot like a Chinese teacher, I hope you don't mind. Please forgive me if any offense occurred. I wish you can write better novels.

Before I watch it, I want to ask, is it 1vs1 or np😊

Yoyo, I just saw the update~

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I smell a strong conspiracy!

I will say. . When I see 59, I think of 8059