Prince of Tennis: Following My Heart
网王之随心所欲
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 62k Words
- Genre
- –
- Era
- –
- Updated
- 17y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
42Chapters
203Favorites
9.5Score
7.2kClicks per chapter
269Comments
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Let me start by saying that it's hard work writing the article. However, there are some areas that need improvement, 1. Articles should not be crowded together and should be spaced appropriately in blank lines. Otherwise it will look messy. 2. Try to figure out the character's mind again. For example: the heroine is already in her twenties but she cried in front of a group of elders. I think I should be stronger and say it [but it seems that I can also yell, [kick] Hmm, it's just like that, I have to second-guess myself and see for myself. Would it be disgusting to say this? Would it be nice to say this? You need to think about it. 3. Focus on the key points and don't write about trivial things. 4. The writing style is immature. This can only be done by reading more good articles. In this case, the description will not be very deliberate. It's the kind that's integrated into the nerves 5.… I don't know if I should revise the article [I know this is not good, but it's not good, but I want to see more exciting articles. The subject matter and ideas, as well as the areas I am dissatisfied with, can be improved in the revision process. Wow, I don't want to read Xiu Wen.
Are you in kindergarten?
The author's writing style is not very proficient, and his ability to control words is not very strong. The writing of the article is a bit deliberate. But it's not bad, come on.
Why. It's the Queen again. I miss Yushi more... But it's pretty good-looking. Author's reply: Thank you for your support! So happy!
The waiting of true love is wonderful~~~Author's reply: Well! I think so too! Sometimes, feelings will slowly accumulate, and as time goes by, they will become stronger and stronger!
It's baffling!! They just said that the female pig would go out and then come back, but they didn't make any substantial progress in the meantime. Sigh
That's it, it's too fast
Damn, remember to remind me not to mess with you. Author's reply: Don't worry! I'm not a petty person!!!!
Great work~Update~
Why not (*.*)