Traveling back in time to the Legend of Zhen Huan, Zhang Youchuan said that she would never let God give her another chance to live again. She would go her own way and let others watch her go! The author just couldn't stand some people and things in the story, so he wrote some stories he thought about, and didn't criticize them.
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The author would like to encourage you to update more (???_??)?
As a first-time writer, this work gave me the feeling that after reading the first part, I didn't want to read it anymore. It seems that each chapter is a story, and the transition in the middle is too rigid, but I still hope you can make some changes to these. No book can attract many readers right after it is written. It's not professional to show your work to others, and find someone who has read all kinds of novels, but you will thank them if you think it's right in the early stage. Wish you success
I would like to recommend my own "Quickly Wear Hypocritical Glory"
You can take a look at it
How is the author? I really like your writing. It's very good. The characters are very consistent. I hope you don't give up.
The author would like to encourage you to update more (???_??)?
As a first-time writer, this work gave me the feeling that after reading the first part, I didn't want to read it anymore. It seems that each chapter is a story, and the transition in the middle is too rigid, but I still hope you can make some changes to these. No book can attract many readers right after it is written. It's not professional to show your work to others, and find someone who has read all kinds of novels, but you will thank them if you think it's right in the early stage. Wish you success
I would like to recommend my own "Quickly Wear Hypocritical Glory" You can take a look at it
How is the author? I really like your writing. It's very good. The characters are very consistent. I hope you don't give up.
So angry, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
I'm going to be depressed. Nothing is going well lately, so finding a sweet article makes me depressed.
Ah, don't give up. It's so well written.
Oh, what a terrible male-female ratio
He Yu has many identities... And is so pitiful
Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers
Brother Long finally bought a mobile phone
Xiaolong's slander hahahahaha Sure enough, strength is king.
This is all subconsciously for you, Gabriel~ The onset of low emotional intelligence also depends on the occasion!
There are knives everywhere in a difficult situation (p′‵.)
Good luck! Grandpa, the fan you were following back then has been updated! ! That scumbag is back! ! ! ! !
It turns out I'm not the only one who's been waiting for so long.
We have always had a shallow relationship, but our love is deep
Wow, it's been updated! Will the author make more updates? I like it!
... Why don't you start coding after reading it? However, the original idea may be completely forgotten.
When will the new book be released? I really want to see it!
Has it been more than two weeks?
What the hell, another trap. If you say it's a trap, it's not over.